Tannenbaum
Anmeldungsdatum: 31.08.2013 Beiträge: 1
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Verfasst am: 31. Aug 2013 15:06 Titel: Email Gastfamilie |
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Meine Frage:
Hallo, kann mir jemand weiter helfen, bin mir ganz sicher, dass ich da einige Fehler eingebaut habe. Danke schon mal im Vorraus
Meine Ideen:
Dear host Family,
I'm looking forward to visiting you in New Zealand for 3 weeks. I hope you'll get me a little bit more to know. My name is XX and I´m 24 years old. I live with my family together in our house in a little village called XXX it´s close to XX.
My father is 62 years old, and since one year he´s a pensioner before he was a bank manager. My mother is 60 years old and she´s a housewife. I´ve one twin sister, she studies French and mathematics to become a primary school teacher. My family loves pets so we have three Persian cat.
I finished my study of pharmacy at the University of XX this year in March, with my seconde state examination. Since May, I´ve to do a practical training for one year and after that I´ve to pass my last state examination, before I can start in my profession. The last half year I spent my time in pharmacy to gain new experiences and to practise everything what I´ve learned. My favourite hobby is riding, but unfortunately I haven´t an own horse yet. Otherwise, I love reading, snowboarding and going out with my friends. I like to eat vegetarian food, but I also eat some meat, like chicken or fish.
I´ll arrive at Auckland airport at 10.45 a.m. of XX September, if the flight isn´t delayed, I hope so.
I´ll start in Frankfurt and I´ll make a stopover in Bangkok for a few hours. My flight number is LH XXXX. After arrival I´ll take taxi to your home.
I´ve got a question about: Do you have Internet? If so, is it possible, that I use your Internet during my stay?
I am looking forward to see you in New Zealand
Best regards |
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alterHund
Anmeldungsdatum: 27.07.2013 Beiträge: 12 Wohnort: Stuttgart
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Verfasst am: 01. Sep 2013 21:14 Titel: |
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Zitat: | I hope you'll get me ... |
Ich vermute, Du meinst:
I expect you want to know/learn a bit more about me.
Vorschlag:
My father, aged 62, was a bank manager and retired a year ago.
My 60 years old mother manages our household.
3 Katzen sind Mehrzal, und das "so" würde ich
einfach durch ein Komma ersetzen.
Ich meine es ist "pharmacology"
was Du studiert hast.
Vorschlag:
For the last half year I worked in A pharmacy ..
( es sei denn Du hast nicht )
Vorschlag:
...I don't own a horse yet. I also love reading, ..
Vorschlag:
Lass Zitat: | I´ve got a question about: |
weg.
Und dann "If so, would you allow me to ..." |
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