 Verfasst am: 21. Dez 2015 15:26 Titel: Text korrigieren |
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| Meine Frage: Kann mir wer bitte helfen meine Texte zu korrigieren ? Wäre echt nett und ist sehr wichtig Meine Ideen: 1. Binge Drinking Bing Drinking is very dangerous, because has no advantages. Bing drinking only has disadvantages. Binge drinking can be seriously bad and harmful to health. It can expose to injury or to unnecessary risks to yourself and others. As well as having adverse short-term effects, binge drinking can also cause long-term effects on your health and wellbeing. The problems on bring drinking is Hangovers, Nausea, Shakiness, Alcohol poisoning and more. 2. Homework On the one hand homework is a preparation for classwork and on the other hand gives for not doing homework punishment. With homework can you lern something and is good for school grades and for your future. Homework is too deepening of the course material, but on the other hand teachers can´t help you when you have a problem with the homework. Homework are stressful and you have not more free time. 3. Home with parents On the one hand the rules in your parents home are hard and on the other hand your life is not stressful, because your parents doing more for the home. Living with parents is better because you don´t need to pay the rend. Your parents cooking for you and you have more free time. Your moher cleans the room/home. When you life alone than your must clean the room and you must cooking for you. |
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