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MI
BeitragVerfasst am: 21. März 2012 00:24    Titel:

Interessiert dich das noch? Dann setze ich mich heute Abend mal dran.

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Khoo-a-lar
BeitragVerfasst am: 14. März 2012 18:45    Titel: Bitte um eine Korrektur oder Tipps zu meiner Inhaltsangabe!

Meine Frage:
Guten Tag

Ich bin neu hier in diesem Forum, und dies ist mein erster Beitrag, deshalb bitte ich um Verständnis für falsches Verhalten und etc.

Ich werde vom Buch "Slam" von Nick Hornby eine Inhaltsangabe, Charakterisierung und etc. schreiben.
Ich hoffe es gibt paar nette User die mich korrigieren und mir am besten Tipps geben was ich alles falsch mache, denn ich bin verdammt schlecht und habe demnach einen Unterkurs in Englisch. :C

Meine Ideen:
Hier ist eine Inhaltsangabe:


Chapter 9
The book ?Slam? from Nick Hornby, is about a boy named Sam who has get a baby with his girlfriend. The trouble is, that he and his girlfriend are teenagers yet. The Chapter 9 is the part , who he tell the their parents, that Alicia is pregnant and keep the baby.
The reaction of Alicia?s parents wasn?t good, because they thought her daughter would have a good future, but now she is pregnant and will get a baby with Sam. Alicia?s father said that?s the fault of the people in the lower class, this is an allusion about Sam?s mom, because she gotten Sam as she was 17 like Alicia is now. When Sam told Alicia?s parents, that they get a baby, Alicia?s Father got very angry and shouted at him and his daughter and her mom began to cry. After that confrontation, they calmed down and went to Sam?s mother. Sam told his mother about the situation, because of that she made a weird noise and was very angry. Alicia?s father said that, Sam ruined the future from Alicia, so Sam?s mother get angrier. She wanted to speak with Sam in private, but Alicia?s father said, that they going to be a family and no one can hide secrets, finally she can speak with Sam alone. Mark the boyfriend from Sam?s mom left the flat in the middle of the conversation about that all.

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