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MI	Verfasst am: 11. Nov 2011 20:38    Titel: Re: Textkorrektur Englisch Ivan hat Folgendes geschrieben: Meine Frage: "The Great Barrier Reef is the biggest coral reef worldwide. You can see it from outer space. The reef lays north-easterly of Australia. In the reef are living a lot species of difeerent animals, for example 1500 species of fish. 6 of 7 species of ocean turtles worldwide are living there. Der Satz gefällt mir nicht so richtig, aber festmachen kann ich nichts. Er sieht eigentlich schon ok aus (einziger Punkt: Zahlen unter zwölf ausschreiben ) The many corals are a perfect hideout for little animals. Snails and sheels hide between the corals to be safe from fishes, birds and others. The warm water in the reef is good for some animals to give birth to their babys. Humpback whales, for example, come from the antarctic to bear their children."
Ivan	Verfasst am: 10. Nov 2011 18:09    Titel: Textkorrektur Englisch Meine Frage: Hallo, ich soll ein kurzes Referat über die Tiere im Great Barrier Reef halten und wollte mal fragen, ob hier jemand mal kurz einen Blick über meinen Text werfen könnte und mögliche grammatikalische Fehler verbessern könnte. "The Great Barrier Reef is the biggest coral reef worldwide. You can see it from outer space. The reef lays north-easterly of Australia. In the reef are living a lot species of difeerent animals, for example 1500 species of fish. 6 of 7 species of ocean turtles worldwide are living there. The many corals are a perfect hideout for little animals. Snails and sheels hide between the corals to be safe from fishes, birds and others. The warm water in the reef is good for some animals to give birth to their babys. Humpback whales, for example, come from the antarctic to bear their childs." Meine Ideen: Danke im Voraus!

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