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tippi	Verfasst am: 28. Jun 2009 18:43    Titel: Re: bitte um korrektur Gast_777 hat Folgendes geschrieben: The abstract about Mr. Christoph ...So was it for the attendee very exhausting to hering him. It was quite exhausting following the lecture. His improper apparel clothing act the remaining to appliance from him. did the rest to it. About the presentation Coming to the presentation there is to say that the detail marketing goals was were missing in the simple presentation. So While listening I'd asked myself what ought me from him wreak what I was suppossed to learn here. NOTHING since he had no flyer hand-out and so he hasn´t won't have the break chance to trade with our company. As When his partners was speaking he looks looked to the floor with entangled arms to the floor. So I think they haven't don't have a good agreement reputation in this company. But there are a few positive points of for the speaker. was that he had a clear struckter in his presentation very god was the link aginst his partner. The presentation was well structured and the linking to the partner came out very good. And he speak spoke out clear and in just the right speed for the audience. And his timing was very god. This was is my opinion about the speaker Mr. Christoph Dear Ms. Mickle I know that my opinion will not in the benchmark from Christoph shrinkage. serve Christoph's grade/mark. I know that his presentation was just as bad as my presentation. I hope that my written opinion influences a action of my or Christoph's note has. your marking/grading. I wishe you delight at the correction of all the mapps and good holidays.WEGLASSEN! Da ist jetzt viel interpretiert worden, aber ich schätze ich habe den Punkt verstanden. Ich will gar nicht genau wissen, was passiert ist. Klingt grausig. Mit etwas mehr Obacht und Fleiß hättest du hier locker einen übersichtlichen Text hinbekommen (wenn du zB nur alle Buchstaben hingeschrieben und Groß-und Kleinschreibung, sowie Zusammenschreibung und nicht-Zusammenschreibung beachtet hättest - sprich beim tippen aufmerksamer gewesen wärst).
tippi	Verfasst am: 28. Jun 2009 15:00    Titel: Re: bitte um korrektur Gast_777 hat Folgendes geschrieben: The abstrct about Mr. Christoph Mr. Christoph quoth spoke about the devoloping development/invention from of headphones. His bearing to the audience was very cautious. Standing in front of the class obviously made him feel uncomfortable. He ashere strictly at got stuck to his paper, and goes roundtip wiggled on his toe tips. becaus this he hasn't enough contact with the conferee. There was no contact/connection to the listeners. So was it for the attendee very exhausting to hering him. His improper apparel act the remaining to appliance from him. About the presentation the detail marketing goals was missing in the simple presentation. So I ask myself what ought me from him wreak. NOTHING he has no flyer and so he hasn´t the break to trade with our copany. As his partners was speaking he looks withentangled arms to the floor. So i thing the haven't a good agreement in his company. But positive points of the speaker was that he had a clear struckter in his presentation very god was the link aginst his partner. And he speak clear an in a the right speed for the audience. And his timing at the presentation was very god. This was my opinion about the speaker Mr. Christoph Dear Ms. Mickle I know that my opinion not in the benchmark from Christoph shrinkage. I no that his presentation just as bad my presentaion was. So I hope that my written opinion a action of my or Christoph's note has. I wishe you delight at the correction of all the mapps and good holidays. muss ma kurz abbrechen
Nalli	Verfasst am: 28. Jun 2009 12:34    Titel: Ich habe auch nichts verstanden von dem Ganzen. Bitte stell doch mal Auszüge aus dem deutschen Ursprungstext rein, vielleicht macht das Ganze dann Sinn.
Jack	Verfasst am: 27. Jun 2009 20:31    Titel: Ich wollte deine Bemühungen nicht niedermachen, aber zumindest im ersten Teil des Textes habe ich leider nicht verstanden, worum es eigentlich ging. Wenn du die Bewertung dringend auf Englisch brauchst, solltest du dich besser an einen professionellen Übersetzer wenden.
Gast_777	Verfasst am: 27. Jun 2009 19:10    Titel: Oh bin ich so schlecht Der text wurde von mir selber überstzt ich weis das ich schlecht in englich bin aber das ich so schlecht bin hätte ich nun nicht von mir gedacht.
Jack	Verfasst am: 27. Jun 2009 14:17    Titel: Der Text klingt nach schlechter automatischer Übersetzung, daher wird der Inhalt größtenteils gar nicht klar. Willst du es nicht vielleicht nochmal selbst versuchen?
Gast_777	Verfasst am: 27. Jun 2009 13:49    Titel: bitte um korrektur Hallo alle zusamen muss eine Vortrag bis Mittwoch bererten habe hier was geschreiben. Es wäre gut wenn mal jemand darüber schauen könnte den ich bin in englisch ein echter looser. Danke für eure bemühungen schon mal im voraus. The abstrct about Mr. Christoph Mr. Christoph quoth about the devoloping from Headphones. His bearing to the audience was very cautious. He ashere strictly at his Paper, and goes roundtip becaus this he hasn't enough contact with the conferee. So was it for the attendee very exhausting to hering him. His improper apparel act the remaining to appliance from him. About the presentation the detail marketing goals was missing in the simple presentation. So I ask myself what ought me from him wreak. NOTHING he has no flyer and so he hasn´t the break to trade with our copany. As his partners was speaking he looks withentangled arms to the floor. So i thing the haven't a good agreement in his company. But positive points of the speaker was that he had a clear struckter in his presentation very god was the link aginst his partner. And he speak clear an in a the right speed for the audience. And his timing at the presentation was very god. This was my opinion about the speaker Mr. Christoph Dear Ms. Mickle I know that my opinion not in the benchmark from Christoph shrinkage. I no that his presentation just as bad my presentaion was. So I hope that my written opinion a action of my or Christoph's note has. I wishe you delight at the correction of all the mapps and good holidays.

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