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Verfasst am: 27. März 2007 15:31 Titel: Re: bitte nachgucken |
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ella hat Folgendes geschrieben: | If you ask me global warming is a very difficult and important topic today. Just remember- since 1900 the temperature of earth increased by more than 1 degree Fahrenheit. Because of that there could be melting ice melt, hurricanes, heat waves, tornados and so on (anders hatte dein nebensatz kein richtiges Prädikat). And human activities are probably the driving force of this trend. Inspite of (although heißt trotzdem, in spite of heißt trotz) the global warming I look on the one hand positive and on the other hand negative into the future (Der Satz gefällt mir syntaktatisch gar nicht und außerdem ist er zu umständlich formuliert. Des weiteren müsstest du wohl Adverbien (positively, negatively)benutzen. Also skyscrapers will be very important. A lot of people could work and live there (SPO). After inventing good robots life will be very easy for the people because everything will be made (besser done) by a robot or computer. But with all these new gadgets and inventions there will be more CO2 ejection and this we have to retreat. So all in all- if we learn how to conservewohl nicht der richtige Begriff energy we will have a good and happy life; If we do not (keine ugs. Abkürzungen) do that global warming will be more and more hier fehlt wohl ein Adjektiv? and we will destroy our own world.
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