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slit wrist
Verfasst am: 02. März 2008 19:05
Titel:
sind so viele Kommas wirklich nötig?
Zombye
Verfasst am: 19. Feb 2008 06:31
Titel: Re: Have you ever though about retreating from society? Expl
fiiny hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Kann jemand die kleine Hausaufgabe mal bitte korrektur lesen?
3. Have you ever though about retreating from society? Explain!
Where is
a
perfect home, maybe
,
in the USA, Australia, New Zealand? Everybody sometimes has a dream
of discovering
another country and
of living
there for the rest of his or her life. In 2006
_
Germans
_
emigrated to several countries,
in
the first place was Switzerland
,
followed by the USA and Austria.
The first point
,
I think
,
is that emigrating is not the same
as
retreating, because
,
when you retreat
,
you can
_
still live in the same country, but only
in
a special place, where nobody knows your identity. For example
,
when I was younger,
of
the age of fourteen, I thought about retreating. My dream was to move to another place
,
where nobody knows
me
,
as
I already told. Probably
,
everybody had this feeling
_
, because
he or she
want
s
to do your own things without your parents,
playing computer games, drinking vodka and such
. Furthermore
,
you can go
_
to an unknown place,
to a
city or
a
country and do all what you want to do. So
,
when you retreat from society and all your friends
,
it is really a new step of your life. You have to leave all things and
people
you like
,
and you have to start somewhere a new and
,
for you maybe also
,
a better life. But you have to see it from two sides. There are not only the good ones. For instance
,
when you think of all these
people
,
who live for years in the jungle, they are very isolated and have no contact to their friends and
people
they really need for conversation. The consequences are that they sometimes
behave
like animals, when they come back home. Admittedly
,
this is the worst thing that can happen
.
B
ut is it necessary that clever
people
go somewhere else
,
where
there
is no pressure of society or
,
maybe
,
where
there
are no
people
,
who can oblige them to something they
will
not do?
muetzli
Verfasst am: 18. Feb 2008 22:58
Titel: Re: Have you ever though about retreating from society? Expl
fiiny hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Kann jemand die kleine Hausaufgabe mal bitte korrektur lesen?
3. Have you ever though about retreating from society? Explain!
Where
you can find the perfect home
, maybe in the USA, Australia, New Zealand? Everybody sometimes has a dream to discover another country and to live there for the rest of his or her life. In 2006 the Germans have emigrated to several countries, on the first place
of the chart
covered Switzerland followed by the USA and Austria.
The first point I think is that emigrating is
not as similar as
retreating, because when you retreat you can also still live in the same country, but only on a
secret
place, where nobody knows your identity. For example when I was younger, in the age of fourteen, I thought about retreating. My dream was to move to another place where nobody knows you,
as
I already told. Probably everybody had this feeling
in the youth
, because you want to do your own things without your parents. Furthermore you can go to an unknown place, city or country and do all things you want to do. So when you retreat from society and all your friends it is really a new step of your life. You have to leave all things and persons you like and you have to start somewhere a new and
maybe you will have a better life, which you haven't known before
. But you have to see it from two sides. There are not only the good
examples
. For instance when you think of all these persons who live for years in the jungle, they are very isolated and have no contact to their friends and persons they really need for conversation. The consequences are that they sometimes conducted like animals, when they come back home. Admittedly this is the worst thing that can happen, but is it necessary that clever persons go somewhere else, where is no pressure of society or maybe where no persons are who can oblige them to something they would not do?
benutz mal ein bisschen anderes vokabular, das macht es interessanter
fiiny
Verfasst am: 18. Feb 2008 20:20
Titel: Have you ever though about retreating from society? Explain!
Kann jemand die kleine Hausaufgabe mal bitte korrektur lesen?
3. Have you ever though about retreating from society? Explain!
Where is the perfect home, maybe in the USA, Australia, New Zealand? Everybody sometimes has a dream to discover another country and to live there for the rest of his or her life. In 2006 the Germans have emigrated to several countries, on the first place was Switzerland followed by the USA and Austria.
The first point I think is that emigrating is not the same like retreating, because when you retreat you can also still live in the same country, but only on a special place, where nobody knows your identity. For example when I was younger, in the age of fourteen, I thought about retreating. My dream was to move to another place where nobody knows you, like I already told. Probably everybody had this feeling in the time of a teenager, because you want to do your own things without your parents. Furthermore you can go, to an unknown place, city or country and do all what you want to do. So when you retreat from society and all your friends it is really a new step of your life. You have to leave all things and persons you like and you have to start somewhere a new and for you maybe also a better life. But you have to see it from two sides. There are not only the good ones. For instance when you think of all these persons who live for years in the jungle, they are very isolated and have no contact to their friends and persons they really need for conversation. The consequences are that they sometimes conducted like animals, when they come back home. Admittedly this is the worst thing that can happen, but is it necessary that clever persons go somewhere else where is no pressure of society or maybe where no persons are who can oblige them to something they would not do?