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Verfasst am: 12. März 2007 15:31
Titel:
Hey ella,
firstly your text seems to be a little bit "untidy", it would have been better to put aspects dealing with each other in one paragraph, but therefore you have to structure your analysis in paragraphs!
To your grammar:
Zitat:
In the picture I see two empty chairs. The picture is black and white and without any colour
s
/
colourless
. In the background is one man who has a chair at his back
(What do you want to say with this?)
. He seems to be very happy. There are very big houses with a lot of bal
c
on
ies
. I think the atmosphere in the picture is peaceful and not loud and hecti
c
but it´s al litttle bit overhelmed
(I think you mean "overwhelming")
. I think the two chairs are empty because the photograph want
s
to show the lonl
i
ness
although
there are so
many
houses an they stand all beside the other ones
(besser: terraced houses)
. The photo is different to
(besser: differs from)
the painting because the other one is colourful. But I think the two photos
(Why photos? There are one photo and one painting, aren't there?)
want to show the same because in both picture
s (It's the same here)
you can see that the people feel alone
although
there are other people or houses. I think the photo is more effective than the painting because in my opinon you could discern earlier what is meen
(meant?)
with the picture or painting.I think the photo is without colours because the photograph want
s
that you only
look
at /
pay attention on
important thin
g
s and not at little
ones
. On the photo there is no one at the chairs but on the painting there are
two
p
eo
ple
I
think that the p
eo
ple know each other but they are alone and
on
the photo there are so
many
p
eo
ple living in the street but you are alone.
If there are any questions, don't hesitate to ask!
ella
Verfasst am: 12. März 2007 14:44
Titel: wie is dieser text
ich muss ne bild beschrieben schreiben un es wär ganz hilfreich wenn den mal jem. nachgucken könnte!!:
In the picture I see two empty chairs. The picture is black and white and without any colour. In the background is one man who has a chair at his back. He seems to be very happy. There are very big houses with a lot of balkons. I think the atmosphere in the picture is peaceful and not loud and hectig but it´s al litttle bit overhelmed. I think the two chairs are empty because the photograph want to show the lonlyness althogh there are so much houses an they stand all beside the other ones. The photo is different to the painting because the other one is colourful. But I think the two photos want to show the same because in both picture you can see that the people feel alone althougt there are other people or houses. I think the photo is more effective than the painting because in my opinon you could discern earlier what is meen with the picture or painting.I think the photo is without colours because the photograph want that you only watch at the important thinks and not at little things. On the photo there is no one at the chairs but on the painting there are to poeple i think that the poeple know each other but they are alone and at the photo there are so much poeple living in the street but you are alone.