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[quote="franzi_baby"]Wir lesen gerade "Dubliners" von James Joyce und ich hab da eine kleine Hausaufgabe bekommen. Ich bin in Grammatik eine totale Idiotin und würde mich freuen wenn mich jemand ein bißchen verbessern könnte!!! Distinguish three Stepps the young narrator takes: Chieldhood, desire to see some life, encounter with journey from innocent childhood to precarios adolscene and show what he experinces In the short story „Dubliners“ we get just a short insight the life of the narrator, but we can see some develop of him. He enjoys his childhood by playing Indian battles with his friends. He escapes in his own world when he is playing or reading some American dedective stories. He doesn’t know enythink of the real adult life. The narrator know, that when he would be a grown up, he had to see the real live and makes his own , real adventures. So he plans with his friends to play turant and walk to the piegeon house. Altought they never arrive the piegen house, something happend to him that shows him a cruelly sight of the live. When they meet the paeophiliac pervers man, it is more than a childish adventure. The man doesn’t touch the narator, but what he discribes about whiping some uncampable boys, let him fear of the man. Durring the short story he smiles at his friend Mahony, he thinks he is an unrespectable boy but in the end he is appreciated to see him. Ganz ganz lieben dank für JEDE Hilfe Liebe grüße Franzi[/quote]
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franzi_baby
Verfasst am: 13. Apr 2008 20:45
Titel:
lieben lieben dank!!!
Ich bin ein bißchen schlecht, ich weis:-)
Schönes restwochenende noch!!!
MI
Verfasst am: 13. Apr 2008 19:56
Titel: Re: Questions
Ich habe mal versucht einige Fehler zu verbessern. Du solltest wohl an den Präpositionen arbeiten!
Gruß
MI
franzi_baby hat Folgendes geschrieben:
In the short story „Dubliners“ we get just a short insight
of
the life of the narrator, but we can see some develop
ment
.
"to develop" ist ein Verb
He enjoys his childhood by playing Indian battles with his friends. He escapes in his own world when he is playing or reading some American dedective stories. He doesn’t know
anything
about
the real adult life.
Ich gehe davon aus, dass er schon weiß, dass sie existiert, aber DARÜBER nichts weiß (to know about)
The narrator know
s
that when he
will
be a grown up, he
will have
to see the real li
f
e and
make
his own, real adventures.
Das ist ja wahrscheinlich, dass er aufwächst, also würde ich will-future verwenden. Ein "s" muss dann an "make" nicht mehr dran, weil das zu "will" gehört.
So he plans to play turant
with his friends
and walk to the piegen house.
Irgendwie finde ich diese Satzstellung besser. Ich glaube auch, das fällt unter die Regel "never seperate a verb and its object". Zweitens: Was heißt "piegen house"? Ich könnte mir höchstens "pigeon house"="Taubenhaus" vorstellen.
Altought they never arrive
at
the piegen house, something happen
s
to him that shows him a
cruel
side
of li
f
e
"grausame Seite" beinhaltet kein Adverb
, außerdem würde ich bei einer Zeit bleiben.
. When they meet the pae
d
ophiliac pervers man, it is more than a childish adventure. The man doesn’t touch the narrator, but what he d
e
scribes about whiping some uncampable boys
makes him being frightened of the man
.
Ich glaube, das wäre so besser
During the short story he
(Wer?)
smiles at his friend Mahony, he thinks he is an unrespectable boy but in the end he is
glad
to see him.
Ist er froh? Dann so...
franzi_baby
Verfasst am: 13. Apr 2008 18:21
Titel: Questions
Wir lesen gerade "Dubliners" von James Joyce und ich hab da eine kleine Hausaufgabe bekommen. Ich bin in Grammatik eine totale Idiotin und würde mich freuen wenn mich jemand ein bißchen verbessern könnte!!!
Distinguish three Stepps the young narrator takes: Chieldhood, desire to see some life, encounter with journey from innocent childhood to precarios adolscene and show what he experinces
In the short story „Dubliners“ we get just a short insight the life of the narrator, but we can see some develop of him.
He enjoys his childhood by playing Indian battles with his friends. He escapes in his own world when he is playing or reading some American dedective stories. He doesn’t know enythink of the real adult life.
The narrator know, that when he would be a grown up, he had to see the real live and makes his own , real adventures. So he plans with his friends to play turant and walk to the piegeon house.
Altought they never arrive the piegen house, something happend to him that shows him a cruelly sight of the live. When they meet the paeophiliac pervers man, it is more than a childish adventure. The man doesn’t touch the narator, but what he discribes about whiping some uncampable boys, let him fear of the man.
Durring the short story he smiles at his friend Mahony, he thinks he is an unrespectable boy but in the end he is appreciated to see him.
Ganz ganz lieben dank für JEDE Hilfe
Liebe grüße Franzi