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[quote="Bino75"]Hallo zusammen, Könntet ihr das bitte einmal Korrekturlesen?! Ich soll einen Urlaubsbrief aus Argentinien schreiben. Dear Ghost, I´m here in Argentinia. It´s a beautyful country. Yesterday I was in the National Park of the Claciars. The area is very famous. There is the only glacian in the world, the Morena. I taken on the boat to see thing at a closer distance. On Monday I decided to take a lazy day. It´s impossible not to love Argentinia, especially after travelling throuh the wildness. The hotels and restaurants attched are nice. And the restaurants and Cafes are very distinguished. I can eat some of the excellent fish fresh. And don´t forget he best steak in the world! Hmmm! The food is expensive, here. You become a dinner to 6 Euro. Every day, the people makes "Siesta" from 12am to 1 pm. Than all the shops are closed. Argentinia, eminently Buenos Aires had most shopping prospects . I can bought on the cheap clothes, shoes and many souvenirs. It´s so wonderful in Argentinia. I would like to live here. I hope you are well. Im back on Saturday and back at work on Thursday. Hey, and I hope my face hsn´t gone pale by then! Best whishes Ich gebe zu das ich bei Grammatik größere Probleme habe. Wäre toll wenn ihr mir weiter helfen könntet. bino[/quote]
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Goldenhind
Verfasst am: 01. Apr 2008 16:00
Titel: Re: Korrekturlesen! Letter
Bino75 hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Dear Ghost,
I´m here in Argentinia
Es heißt Argentina ohne i
. It´s a beautyful country.
Yesterday I was in the National Park of the Claciars. The area is very famous. There is the only glacian
was ist das?
in the world, the Morena. I taken
willst du passiv benutzen? Dann "was taken", andernfalls weiß ich nicht genau, was du sagen willst
" on the boat to see thing
s
at a closer distance. On Monday I decided to take a lazy day. It´s impossible not to love Argentinia, especially after travelling throuh the
wilderness
.
The hotels and restaurants attched
von meinem Gefühl nicht das richtige Wort..
are nice. And the restaurants and Cafes are very distinguished. I can eat some of the excellent fish fresh
ly
. And don´t forget he best steak in the world! Hmmm! The food is expensive, here. You
get (become heißt "werden")
a dinner
for
6 Euro
s
. Every day, the people
makes wenn du "Leute" meinst und nicht "Volk", dann "make" ohne s
"Siesta" from 12am to 1 pm.
Then all shops
are closed.
Argentinia, eminently Buenos Aires had
wieso past?
most shopping prospects . I
could buy
cheap clothes, shoes and many souvenirs. It´s so wonderful in Argentinia. I would like to live here.
I hope you are well. Im back on Saturday and back at work on Thursday. Hey, and I hope my face hsn´t gone pale by then!
Best whishes
Bino75
Verfasst am: 31. März 2008 23:08
Titel: Korrekturlesen! Letter
Hallo zusammen,
Könntet ihr das bitte einmal Korrekturlesen?! Ich soll einen Urlaubsbrief aus Argentinien schreiben.
Dear Ghost,
I´m here in Argentinia. It´s a beautyful country.
Yesterday I was in the National Park of the Claciars. The area is very famous. There is the only glacian in the world, the Morena. I taken on the boat to see thing at a closer distance. On Monday I decided to take a lazy day. It´s impossible not to love Argentinia, especially after travelling throuh the wildness.
The hotels and restaurants attched are nice. And the restaurants and Cafes are very distinguished. I can eat some of the excellent fish fresh. And don´t forget he best steak in the world! Hmmm! The food is expensive, here. You become a dinner to 6 Euro. Every day, the people makes "Siesta" from 12am to 1 pm. Than all the shops are closed.
Argentinia, eminently Buenos Aires had most shopping prospects . I can bought on the cheap clothes, shoes and many souvenirs. It´s so wonderful in Argentinia. I would like to live here.
I hope you are well. Im back on Saturday and back at work on Thursday. Hey, and I hope my face hsn´t gone pale by then!
Best whishes
Ich gebe zu das ich bei Grammatik größere Probleme habe. Wäre toll wenn ihr mir weiter helfen könntet.
bino