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[quote="Hansy"][quote]Achte auf die Zeiten und auf Wortwiederholungen.[/quote] :haue: Ehmmm ja. :haue: :tongue: [size=18]Danke, danke, .....[/size] :tongue:[/quote]
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Ulli
Verfasst am: 02. Apr 2006 17:16
Titel: Re: Korrekturvorschlag
Hansy hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Zitat:
Achte auf die Zeiten und auf Wortwiederholungen.
Ehmmm ja.
Danke, danke, .....
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Hansy
Verfasst am: 02. Apr 2006 11:57
Titel: Re: Korrekturvorschlag
Zitat:
Achte auf die Zeiten und auf Wortwiederholungen.
Ehmmm ja.
Danke, danke, .....
Ulli
Verfasst am: 01. Apr 2006 18:22
Titel: Korrekturvorschlag
Hi Hansy
hier mein Korrekturvorschlag
When I saw the watch was broken and the men coming towards me, I began to run away. They began to run after me, but I was quite faster than the men. After that hard time I went to the apprentice’s house and there I found Esther. She said to me to come on! Go into our room!. At that moment I was really happy for the first time. Then I sat down on a chair, asked for a piece of paper and put out my penknife. At first I was opening my pocket watch to look what happens then??? . Then I saw that the gear wheel was damaged. I knew how to repair this, because my uncle is a clockmaker. That is why I only need a little piece of metal.
But in that time there weren’t so little pieces of metal so I cut a little piece of the clock hand and repaired the gear. Now it was finally working. At the same time the machine breakers knocked at the door. I put Esther’s hand ????and used the Time-T-Watch. But the machine breakers were faster than the watch. While they were opening the door I woke up and realized that I only had been dreaming.
Achte auf die Zeiten und auf Wortwiederholungen. Die Stellen, die ich mit ??? versehen haben, waren mir unklar.
Hansy
Verfasst am: 01. Apr 2006 15:37
Titel: Bitte um Kontrolle meines Textes
Könntet ihr bitte meien Text kontrollieren:
So if I saw the watch was broken and the men cam towards me, I began to run away. The man begins to run after me, but I was quiet faster then the men. After this hard time I went to the apprentice house and there I found Esther. She says to me ‘Come on! Go in to our room!’. In this moment I was the first time really happy. Then I sad down to a chair, ask for a piece of paper and put out my penknife. At first I was opening my clock to look what them happens. Then I saw that the gear wheel was damaged. I know how to repair this, because I have an uncle and he is clockmaker. So I only need a little peace of metal.
But in this time there weren’t so little peaces of metal so I cut a little peace of the clock hand and repair the gear. Now it was working. In this moment the Machine Breakers knock on the door. I put Esther hand and use the Time-T-Watch. But the Machine Breakers was faster then the watch. In this moment as the Machine Breakers open the door I open my eyes and I saw I was only dreaming!
DANKE!