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[quote="Ulli"]Hi :wink: hier mein Korrekturvorschlag ;) What's going on with Jenny? Last week she was a shy ninth-grade high-school kid and now she's hanging around with [b]rock[/b] stars in their hotel suits or celebrating at their houses. She even [b]risks[/b] to [b]get[/b] thrown out of Conctance but she [b]doesn't [/b] care. She wants to go to[b] a[/b] boarding school anyway, like Serena did [b]before[/b]. Dan is also thrown out, but not from school. He is thrown out of the "Raves" because he sang really [b]bad[/b] at their last gig and afterwards he started an affair with Damians wife. When Stan 5. told Blair that he [b]would not [/b]get into Yale, she threw him out of her [b]apartment[/b] which she [b]shares[/b] with Vanessa. When Blair invited Aaron for dinner, it was love at first sight between him and Vanessa. Now they do everything and go everywhere togehter. :wink: Nach oben[/quote]
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Ulli
Verfasst am: 20. Jun 2005 20:42
Titel: summary
Hi
hier mein Korrekturvorschlag
What's going on with Jenny? Last week she was a shy ninth-grade high-school kid and now she's hanging around with
rock
stars in their hotel suits or celebrating at their houses. She even
risks
to
get
thrown out of Conctance but she
doesn't
care. She wants to go to
a
boarding school anyway, like Serena did
before
. Dan is also thrown out, but not from school. He is thrown out of the "Raves" because he sang really
bad
at their last gig and afterwards he started an affair with Damians wife. When Stan 5. told Blair that he
would not
get into Yale, she threw him out of her
apartment
which she
shares
with Vanessa. When Blair invited Aaron for dinner, it was love at first sight between him and Vanessa. Now they do everything and go everywhere togehter.
Nach oben
Sleepy Hollow
Verfasst am: 20. Jun 2005 20:23
Titel: Summary
Soo, nun der dritte meiner Summarys.
What's going on with Jenny? Last week she was a shy ninth grade high-school kid and now she's hanging around with Rock stars in their hotel suits or celebrating at their houses. She is even risking to got thrown out of Conctance but she didn't care. She wants to go to boarding school anyway, like Serena did. Dan is also thrown out, but not from school. He is thrown out of the "Raves" because he sang really badly at their last gig and afterwards he started an affair with Damians wife. When Stan 5. told Blair that he didn't get into Yale she threw him out of her appartement which she now shares with Vanessa. When Blair invited Aaron for dinner, it was love at first sight between him and Vanessa. Now they do everything and go everywhere togehter.