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[quote="Sleepy Hollow"]Hallo, ich habe noch einen kleinen summary geschrieben. Sprachlich eigentlich auf unterstem niveau, aber naja... wäre lieb wenn den jemand verbessern würde! While Nate is on a sailing-trip with his friends, Blairis flirting with Paris 5, grandson of Paris 3. Her way of getting into Yale? At the same time is Serena looking at old pictures of Paris 3. with him in his library. Blair moved to the Plaza Hotel, because she needs space to learn and especially to meet hefself with Nate. Jenny and Elise are at the Raves gig, pretending to be cool, bored models. At least, Jenny IS a model. Vanessa and her new (room)mate are just joining the gig for a few minutes, until they went on to an other party.[/quote]
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Ulli
Verfasst am: 10. Jun 2005 10:05
Titel: summary
Hi sleep hollow
hier mein Korrekturvorschlag
While Nate is on a sailing-trip with his friends, Blairis
is
flirting with Paris 5, grandson of Paris 3. Her way of getting into Yale? At the same time Serena
is
looking at
ancient
pictures of Paris 3 with him in his library. Blair
has
moved to the Plaza Hotel, because she needs space to learn and especially to meet Nate.
Jenny and Elise are at the Raves
gig (?),
pretending to be cool, bored models.
Finally
Jenny is a model. Vanessa and her new (room)mate
just join
the gig for a few minutes,
until they go to visit another
party.
Vergleiche deinen Text mit meinem Vorschlag.
Sleepy Hollow
Verfasst am: 09. Jun 2005 21:16
Titel: noch ein summary
Hallo,
ich habe noch einen kleinen summary geschrieben. Sprachlich eigentlich auf unterstem niveau, aber naja... wäre lieb wenn den jemand verbessern würde!
While Nate is on a sailing-trip with his friends, Blairis flirting with Paris 5, grandson of Paris 3. Her way of getting into Yale? At the same time is Serena looking at old pictures of Paris 3. with him in his library. Blair moved to the Plaza Hotel, because she needs space to learn and especially to meet hefself with Nate.
Jenny and Elise are at the Raves gig, pretending to be cool, bored models. At least, Jenny IS a model. Vanessa and her new (room)mate are just joining the gig for a few minutes, until they went on to an other party.