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[quote="Ulli"]@ englisch89 :) hi, mein Korrekturvorschlag hierzu ;) ) [b]Never he has been[/b] so angry like now, but he [b]should [/b] to think more about his finances. 2) He can't pay $ 2,200 and so he swears to take [b]revenge[/b] on his ex-girlfriend, then [b]he will have[/b] more than $ 20,000 debts and [b]additionally [/b] $2,200 (Vieleicht besser: kommen auch noch hinzu, oder so, wie könnte ich das besser schreiben?) 3) He can't pay [b]back[/b] the money and hopes, that they will forget his debts. 4) Four[b] months[/b] later the police comes to [b]his house[/b] because [b]he still hasn't paid[/b] his debts[b] to[/b] a lot of firms, and says, that he [b]is going to be[/b] arrested. 5)He [b]is able to[/b] flee to his car and drives away. 6)Because his ex-girlfriend [b]has made[/b] a lot of his debts, and he is (sowieso?) arrested [b]anyway[/b] , he searches for her and kills her. 7)Now he is in arrest for the rest of his life but he [b]thinks[/b] that [b]is[/b] a good price for [b]it.[/b] Manchmal sind die Sätze etwas zu lang bzw. verschachtelt. ?( ;)[/quote]
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me
Verfasst am: 29. Jul 2005 10:47
Titel:
Gast23 hat Folgendes geschrieben:
hi,
mein Korrekturvorschlag:
Never he has been so angry like now, but he
should think
more about his finances.
mein vorschlag dazu
:
He has never been so angry before but he should think more about his finances. ( würd ich so sagen)
im englischen gibt es nur selten kommata
Gast23
Verfasst am: 03. Jun 2005 18:16
Titel:
hi,
mein Korrekturvorschlag:
Never he has been so angry like now, but he
should think
more about his finances.
Ulli
Verfasst am: 02. Jun 2005 10:01
Titel: Sätze
@ englisch89
hi, mein Korrekturvorschlag hierzu
)
Never he has been
so angry like now, but he
should
to think more about his finances.
2) He can't pay $ 2,200 and so he swears to take
revenge
on his ex-girlfriend, then
he will have
more than $ 20,000 debts and
additionally
$2,200 (Vieleicht besser: kommen auch noch hinzu, oder so, wie könnte ich das besser schreiben?)
3) He can't pay
back
the money and hopes, that they will forget his debts.
4) Four
months
later the police comes to
his house
because
he still hasn't paid
his debts
to
a lot of firms, and says, that he
is going to be
arrested.
5)He
is able to
flee to his car and drives away.
6)Because his ex-girlfriend
has made
a lot of his debts, and he is (sowieso?) arrested
anyway
, he searches for her and kills her.
7)Now he is in arrest for the rest of his life but he
thinks
that
is
a good price for
it.
Manchmal sind die Sätze etwas zu lang bzw. verschachtelt.
englisch89
Verfasst am: 01. Jun 2005 21:24
Titel: Etwas für Englischkönner! Textüberprüfung! Bitte um Hilfe!
Hallo!
Ich hab mal einen Text geschrieben und ich wäre sehr nett und ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ich mich auf meine Fehler aufmerksam machen könntet und Verbesserundvorschläge machen würdet.
Text:
1) Never before he was so angry like now, but he has to think more about his finances.
2) He can't pay $ 2,200 and so he swears to take revange on his ex-girlfriend, then he has more than $ 20,000 debts and now this $2,200 (Vieleicht besser: kommen auch noch hinzu, oder so, wie könnte ich das besser schreiben?)
3) He can't pay the money and hopes, that they will forget his debts.
4) Four monthes later the police comes to him, because he didn't pay his debts by a lot of firms, and says, that he is arrested.
5)He can flee to his car and drives away.
6)Because his ex-girlfriend made a lot of his debts, and he is so or so (sowieso?) arrested, he searches for her and kills her.
7)Now he is in arrest for the rest of his life , but he zhinks, that it was a good price for this.
Danke im Voraus!