Startseite
Forum
Fragen
Suchen
Über Uns
Registrieren
Login
FAQ
Suchen
Foren-Übersicht
->
Übersetzungen und Vokabeln
Antwort schreiben
Benutzername
(du bist
nicht
eingeloggt!)
Titel
Nachrichtentext
Smilies
Weitere Smilies ansehen
Schriftfarbe:
Standard
Dunkelrot
Rot
Orange
Braun
Gelb
Grün
Oliv
Cyan
Blau
Dunkelblau
Indigo
Violett
Weiß
Schwarz
Schriftgröße:
Schriftgröße
Winzig
Klein
Normal
Groß
Riesig
Tags schließen
[quote="Pinpal"]Ich bin jetzt selbst nicht soooo der Englischprofi, aber ich hab dir mal ein paar Sachen angestrichen, die ich persönlich anders gemacht hätte :) Today, I took a look into the mailbox. I thought [b]there[/b] would not be anything interesting for me inside of it, but I was wrong. There was a very classic envelope. Normally, I am not receiving letters like this. I was [b]so[/b] wired up about the content [b]that[/b] I[b] could not[/b] wait until I [b]was [/b]in the house again. So I opened it very fast. It was a letter from the ex-student-councilors. They invited ME to the alumni reunion. That must [b]be Ruthie's[/b] idea. Nobody else is so forgiving as she is. I know ten years ago I would not have thought like this but we are all older now. Well, most of us are. I remember our fight before our graduation but I cannot remember when I was more [b]wrathful[/b] than during this time. She took my boyfriend! He was the only one I had in this time. I was alone. I was a nobody and it was really hard [b]for me[/b] to accept this. Ruthie was right when I was wrong. I was violent, I was young and inexperienced but now I know my bads. This time is gone but mistakes are not forgiven just because time goes by. Even if it will be hard to go there, I will go to the reunion and meet the others. Four weeks later I was ready to face all my ex-friends and rivals. The assembly hall was not far away from where I live now with my husband and my son. I decided to leave them at home, because I did not know how Ruthie, AJ and all the others [b]would[/b] react. Resolved, that I will make peace with the others and of course with myself, I started driving but then, some minutes away from the assembly hall, I was chickenhearted because I [b]did[/b] not know what [b]was going to[/b] happen this evening. Das fette sind meine Anmerkungen, ohne Garantie auf Vollständigkeit und absolute Richtigkeit :)[/quote]
Optionen
HTML ist
aus
BBCode
ist
an
Smilies sind
an
BBCode in diesem Beitrag deaktivieren
Smilies in diesem Beitrag deaktivieren
Spamschutz
Text aus Bild eingeben
Alle Zeiten sind GMT + 1 Stunde
Gehe zu:
Forum auswählen
Themenbereiche
----------------
Englisch Grundstufe
Grammatik
Textanalysen und Interpretationen
Übersetzungen und Vokabeln
Landeskunde
Sonstiges
Sonstiges
----------------
Off-Topic
Ankündigungen
Thema-Überblick
Autor
Nachricht
Unknown student
Verfasst am: 23. Jan 2012 21:39
Titel:
Vielen Dank.
Das Meiste konnte ich unter eigener Dummheit verbuchen. Deswegen bi ich umso dankbarer wenn jemand meine Fehler findet.
Pinpal
Verfasst am: 20. Jan 2012 13:11
Titel:
Ich bin jetzt selbst nicht soooo der Englischprofi, aber ich hab dir mal ein paar Sachen angestrichen, die ich persönlich anders gemacht hätte
Today, I took a look into the mailbox. I thought
there
would not be anything interesting for me inside of it, but I was wrong. There was a very classic envelope. Normally, I am not receiving letters like this.
I was
so
wired up about the content
that
I
could not
wait until I
was
in the house again. So I opened it very fast. It was a letter from the ex-student-councilors. They invited ME to the alumni reunion. That must
be Ruthie's
idea. Nobody else is so forgiving as she is. I know ten years ago I would not have thought like this but we are all older now. Well, most of us are. I remember our fight before our graduation but I cannot remember when I was more
wrathful
than during this time. She took my boyfriend! He was the only one I had in this time. I was alone. I was a nobody and it was really hard
for me
to accept this. Ruthie was right when I was wrong. I was violent, I was young and inexperienced but now I know my bads. This time is gone but mistakes are not forgiven just because time goes by. Even if it will be hard to go there, I will go to the reunion and meet the others.
Four weeks later I was ready to face all my ex-friends and rivals. The assembly hall was not far away from where I live now with my husband and my son.
I decided to leave them at home, because I did not know how Ruthie, AJ and all the others
would
react.
Resolved, that I will make peace with the others and of course with myself, I started driving but then, some minutes away from the assembly hall, I was chickenhearted because I
did
not know what
was going to
happen this evening.
Das fette sind meine Anmerkungen, ohne Garantie auf Vollständigkeit und absolute Richtigkeit
Unknown student
Verfasst am: 18. Jan 2012 18:29
Titel: Coming of Age - Reunion
Meine Frage:
Hallo,
ich habe mal einen Text verfasst, den wir für unseren Englisch Leistungskurs (Klasse 11 ) freiwillig schreiben konnte. Es geht um das Buch "Coming of Age". Ich habe über das Klassentreffen nach 10 Jahren aus der Sicht von Erika geschrieben. Ich würde mich über inhaltliche (evtl.) und sprachliche Verbesserungsvorschläge freuen. Vielleicht findet ihr auch noch Wendungen die mehr Slang enthalten. Danke schonmal.
Meine Ideen:
Erika
Today, I took a look into the mailbox. I thought that would not be anything interesting for me inside of it, but I was wrong. There was a very classic envelope. Normally, I am not receiving letters like this.
I was very wired up about the content so I cannot wait until I am in the house again. So I opened it very fast. It was a letter from the ex-student-councilors. They invited ME to the alumni reunion. That must me Ruthie?s idea. Nobody else is so forgiving as she is. I know ten years ago I would not have thought like this but we are all older now. Well, most of us are. I remember our fight before our graduation but I cannot remember when I was more agro than during this time. She took my boyfriend! He was the only one I had in this time. I was alone. I was a nobody and it was really hard to accept this. Ruthie was right when I was wrong. I was violent, I was young and inexperienced but now I know my bads. This time is gone but mistakes are not forgiven just because time goes by. Even if it will be hard to go there, I will go to the reunion and meet the others.
Four weeks later I was ready to face all my ex-friends and rivals. The assembly hall was not far away from where I live now with my husband and my son.
I decided to leave them at home, because I did not know how Ruthie, AJ and all the others will react.
Resolved, that I will make peace with the others and of course with myself, I started driving but then, some minutes away from the assembly hall, I was chickenhearted because I do not know what will happen this evening.
(Das ist nur ein Teil, morgen schreibe ich weiter)