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[quote="maan446"]Hallo, wenn Ihr Zeit habt, könntet Ihr ja mal kurz meinen Mustertext durchlesen und mir eure Meinung dazu sagen. (Grammatik, Zeit, Satzstellung, Vokabeln, ect.) Die Aufgabenstellung lautet wie folgt: A US multinational is considering locating a new manufacturing plant (Produktionsanlage) in your city/town. Write a 140-160 word report on why your city/town would be suitable for the plant and make a recommendation as to the best site for the new plant. --------------------------Mein Text--------------------------------------------- Dear Sir or Madam, i have heard that your Company expects to build a new Plant in Innsbruck. Austria is located in the central of Europe, next to Italy, Swizz, Germany, Hungary and Slovenia. Innsbruck has a very good infrastructure with many busses und a big train station. A vast number of logistic companies drive through Tirol and have often also offices here. A breath taking atmosphere with mountains all around you is a very beautiful place to be. The university hospital has an excellent reputation all around the world. Also plenty students from Austria, Italy and Germany come here to make there academic training. Austrians are very hardworking people with excellent technical skills. The Airport from Innsbruck is near the city. The planes there bring you all around the world. Munich, Zurich and Milano are also not far away from Innsbruck, it takes you about 1,5 to 3 hours by car to get there.[/quote]
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Eris
Verfasst am: 28. Sep 2011 01:13
Titel: Re: Text für FH Aufnahmetest
Dear Sir or Madam,
I
have heard that your Company expects to build a new Plant in Innsbruck
in
Austria,
which
is located in the
centre
of Europe,
with its boarders
to Italy,
Switzerland
, Germany, Hungary and Slovenia. Innsbruck has a very good infrastructure with many busses und a big train station. A vast number of logistic companies drive through Tirol and have often also offices here. A breath taking atmosphere with mountains all around you is a very beautiful place to be. The university hospital has an excellent reputation all around the world. Also plenty
of
students from Austria, Italy and Germany come here to make
their
academic training. Austrians are very hardworking people with excellent technical skills. The Airport from Innsbruck is near the city. The planes there bring you all around the world. Munich, Zurich and Milano are also not far away from Innsbruck, it takes you about
one and a half to three
hours by car to get there.
----------------------------------------
There you go!
Allerdings ein Tipp: ich würde der Firma nicht explizit beschreiben, an welche Länder Österreich grenzt, schließlich scheinen sie schon zu wissen, wo das ist. Trotzdem habe ich es dir korrigiert, man kann ja nie wissen, wozu es nochmal gut sein wird.
P.S. Übrigens: es heißt auf Englisch "Milan".
hanisepp
Verfasst am: 27. Sep 2011 21:43
Titel:
Also ich habe nicht den ganzen Text durchgelesen, aber mit ist das kleine I am Anfang und "Swizz" statt "Swiss" gleich aufgefallen. Company würde ich auch klein schreiben, Plant ebenfalls. Mit train station meinst du wohl railway station. Airport ist glaube ich auch klein zu schreiben. Den Satz gleich danach würde ich ganz weglassen (The planes...)
Edit: na gut jetzt habe ich den ganzen Text gelesen
maan446
Verfasst am: 04. Jul 2011 14:36
Titel: Text für FH Aufnahmetest
Hallo,
wenn Ihr Zeit habt, könntet Ihr ja mal kurz meinen Mustertext durchlesen und mir eure Meinung dazu sagen. (Grammatik, Zeit, Satzstellung, Vokabeln, ect.)
Die Aufgabenstellung lautet wie folgt:
A US multinational is considering locating a new manufacturing plant (Produktionsanlage)
in your city/town. Write a 140-160 word report on why your city/town would be suitable
for the plant and make a recommendation as to the best site for the new plant.
--------------------------Mein Text---------------------------------------------
Dear Sir or Madam,
i have heard that your Company expects to build a new Plant in Innsbruck. Austria is located in the central of Europe, next to Italy, Swizz, Germany, Hungary and Slovenia. Innsbruck has a very good infrastructure with many busses und a big train station. A vast number of logistic companies drive through Tirol and have often also offices here. A breath taking atmosphere with mountains all around you is a very beautiful place to be. The university hospital has an excellent reputation all around the world. Also plenty students from Austria, Italy and Germany come here to make there academic training. Austrians are very hardworking people with excellent technical skills. The Airport from Innsbruck is near the city. The planes there bring you all around the world. Munich, Zurich and Milano are also not far away from Innsbruck, it takes you about 1,5 to 3 hours by car to get there.