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[quote="Lisa1336"]Hallo ihr lieben.. Habe diese Woche ein Referat in Englisch und bin leider kein Profi darin Englisch zu schreiben :help: ... Könnte mit bitte jemend helfen und den Text korrigieren?? Es wäre mir eine suuper große Hilfe. Danke Liebe Grüße Lisa Dear Mr. Stückler, Dear classmates Last week we talk about transport. I think it’s one of the most important things because the development in the last years was getting faster and faster. I can’t introduce a life without a car. Nearly every teenager has got a car. In the first days, when they get their driving licence and get their own car, they would drive everywhere, to work or even if they drive across the street to get to the supermarket. Simple everywhere they could get with their own car. On the one hand I think it’s good for the young boys and girls to get independent. They must not wait for the bus or train, they could get whenever and wherever they want. But on the other hand, if all the people who have got a driving licence drive every day, the air became very dirty. The air is nowadays not the best and I think we should mostly leave our car at home and to hoof it. But all people those has got a car enjoy their independence and would not give their cars away. Because the people are get comfortable and lazy. Now our environment is very pollute, because people don’t think about it or don’t be careful with it. Sometime, the world would be horrible if we don’t begin with small things do make our world to a better one. For example…separate your refuse, turn your radiator back when the sun comes out or drive a little bit foresee, so you need only a little bit petrol. Think about the things I have told you and make our world to a better one. Thanks for listening…[/quote]
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lathrel
Verfasst am: 08. Feb 2010 18:23
Titel: Re: Hiiilfe... Bitte ganz, ganz dringend
Lisa1336 hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Dear Mr. Stückler, Dear classmates
Last week we talk
ed
about transport. I think it’s one of the most important things because the development in the last years was getting faster and faster.
I can’t introduce a life without a car. Nearly every teenager has got a car. In the first days, when they get their driving licence and get their own car, they would drive everywhere, to work or even if they drive across the street to get to the supermarket. Simpl
y
everywhere they could
drive
with their own car.
On the one hand I think it’s good for the young boys and girls to get independent. They
have not
wait for the bus or train, they could get whenever and wherever they want.
But on the other hand, if all the people who have got a driving licence drive every day, the air
becomes
very dirty. The air is nowadays not the best and I think we should mostly leave our car at home and to hoof it.
But all people those has got a car enjoy their independence and would not give their cars away because the people are get comfortable and lazy.
Now our environment is very pollute, because people don’t think about it or don’t be careful with it. Sometime the world would be horrible if we don’t begin with small things
to
make our world to a better one.
For example…separate your refuse, turn your radiator back when the sun
shines
or drive a little bit foresee, so you need only a little bit petrol.
Think about
these
things I have told you and make our world to a better one.
Thanks for listening…
Ich hoffe ich konnte die bisschen weiter helfen
Lisa1336
Verfasst am: 08. Feb 2010 13:38
Titel: Hiiilfe... Bitte ganz, ganz dringend
Hallo ihr lieben..
Habe diese Woche ein Referat in Englisch und bin leider kein Profi darin Englisch zu schreiben
... Könnte mit bitte jemend helfen und den Text korrigieren??
Es wäre mir eine suuper große Hilfe.
Danke
Liebe Grüße Lisa
Dear Mr. Stückler, Dear classmates
Last week we talk about transport. I think it’s one of the most important things because the development in the last years was getting faster and faster.
I can’t introduce a life without a car. Nearly every teenager has got a car. In the first days, when they get their driving licence and get their own car, they would drive everywhere, to work or even if they drive across the street to get to the supermarket. Simple everywhere they could get with their own car.
On the one hand I think it’s good for the young boys and girls to get independent. They must not wait for the bus or train, they could get whenever and wherever they want.
But on the other hand, if all the people who have got a driving licence drive every day, the air became very dirty. The air is nowadays not the best and I think we should mostly leave our car at home and to hoof it.
But all people those has got a car enjoy their independence and would not give their cars away. Because the people are get comfortable and lazy.
Now our environment is very pollute, because people don’t think about it or don’t be careful with it. Sometime, the world would be horrible if we don’t begin with small things do make our world to a better one.
For example…separate your refuse, turn your radiator back when the sun comes out or drive a little bit foresee, so you need only a little bit petrol.
Think about the things I have told you and make our world to a better one.
Thanks for listening…