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Mario · Gast

HI wäre schön wenn jemand meinen text korrigieren könnte:

The old woman is forty-five years old. She wear a scarf,trousers, a padded jacket and a pair of American style sneakers so that she looks like an Eskimo. Furthermore the old woman seems to be very poor because she found hos shoes in a dustbin. In Addition it seems that the woman have got not many friends. She often feeds birds, alon inapark and cares about them.

Ukkat · Gast

"The old woman is forty-five years old"

um den rechtschreibfehlern zu entgehen, kannst du auch einfach 45 years schreiben,denn ab der Zahl 12 muss man die englischen Zahlen nicht mehr ausschreiben.

"She wear a scarf,trousers, a padded jacket and a pair of American style sneakers so that she looks like an Eskimo."

she wearS ( immer an das dritte person s denken.
Bin mir jetzt nicht sicher,aber ich glaub das englische Wort für Eskimo ist anders....guck am besten nochmal im Wörterbuch nach!

"Furthermore the old woman seems to be very poor because she found hos shoes in a dustbin."

she has found his shoes in a dust bin ( wird immer meinung nach auseinander geschrieben ).

"In Addition it seems that the woman have got not many friends. She often feeds birds, alon inapark and cares about them."

In addition....

woman has got ( auch hier wieder an das dritte person singular s denken )....

She often feeds birds alone in a park and cares about them.

Ansonsten ist soweit alles richtig.

edi · Gast

The old woman is forty-five years old. She wears a scarf,trousers, a padded jacket and a pair of American style sneakers so that she looks like an Eskimo. Furthermore the old woman seems to be very poor because she found those shoes in a dustbin. In Addition it seems that the woman hasn't got many friends. She often feeds birds, alone in a park and cares about them.

Mario · Gast

alles klar vielen dank. JO das mit dem S ist schon so ne Sache die ich sehr gerne vergesse..^^