Einleitung zur short story

julemchly · Anmeldungsdatum: 20.03.2016 Beiträge: 1

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The short story ,,the television special'' written by Roderick Fletscher is about the point that our planet has limits and that we have to solve this problem befor our world will end wihout any natural resources and other vital things

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The short story ,,the television special'' written by Roderick Fletscher deals with fact/topic that our planet's resources are limited and that we must find solutions to this problem before our world runs out of most of the things we need to survive.

Ponever · Anmeldungsdatum: 29.07.2018 Beiträge: 14

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