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Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389
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Verfasst am: 14. Mai 2005 21:10 Titel: Korrekturvorschlag |
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Hi Jochen1991 ,
hier meine Verbessserungsvorschläge
1.Leider regnete es den ganzen Tag.
I am afraid it has been raining all the day.
Unfortunately, it had been raining all day.
2. Es war wirklich lustig mitanzusehen, als Sarah gegen Billy in einem neuen Computerspiel mit einer Runde vorsprung gewann.
? It was fun seeing how Sarah defeat Billy in a new game with a round lead.
oder eher
It was really funny when Sarah defeated Billy in a new game with a round lead???
It was really funny watching Sarah when she was defeating Billy at a new computer game with one lap headstart.
3. Ich könnte auf den Test verzichten.
I could to without this test.
I could do without the test.
LG Ulli _________________ LG Ulli
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