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BeitragVerfasst am: 13. Dez 2014 09:21    Titel: Should the school begin at 9:00 am? Antworten mit Zitat

Meine Frage:
Hallo Leute ...Ich muss eine Rede schreiben (speech)....,ich muss meine Leser überzeugen....ich gehe in die 10.Klasse
Ich würde mich über eine Kontrolle (Rechtschriebung,Grammatik,Sprache) sehr doll freuen.
Vielen Dank

Meine Ideen:
Good morning /afternoon /evening ladiesand gentlemen.
My name is Max May and I am delighted to be here today to talk to you about, if it is useful that the school lessons begins later.
As you all know, today in the winter it is very dark in the morning. So the question arises: Should the school begins at 9:00 am?

My talk is divided into 4 parts. I`ll start with that the accidents could avoid, then I will look at that the students are rested and attentive, next I will tell that tochange the school-time have advatges not only for the people but also for the teachers, and finally I will come to my conclusion. There I want to sum it up and why you should agree with me. I will be glad to answer any questions that you may have at the end.

Let me come to my first argument: Many people go to school at 6:00 am in the morning.
When it is winter, the people are afraid and could cause accidents. The pedestrian , who go to school,would not be seen by car driver, because they have a bad view in the darkness. So that I could arises a accident. If the school begins two hours later, the car driver would see better and could avoid accidents.

The next important argument is that the students are rested and attentive. What I am basically saying is that the best films begin after 9:00pm. Although you know that you must wake up in the morning, you watch films and go to sleep after midnight.
Now I want to draw your attention to the fact that you often go to your friends at 9:00pm and come home one or two hour later.
Maybe the school close at 4:00pm and first you must make the homeworks or help your mum.
It is a matter of common sense :"Business before pleasure" The reason for this is, you are not concentrating at school.

Finally I would like to ponit out that the teachers have advantages too. If the students are rested, they are more energetic and could work better during the lessons. Also the teacher would have attentive listeners.

Let me give you a short overview of what I have said.
So to summarise the mainpoints of my talk is that the teachers have a advantag and the students are able to focus more at their lessons, when the school begins later. Also you can watch the films at night and you could sleep well, so you`re for the next day fit.
To put it in a nutshell, you should agree with me because when the school is later, it could be enjoy for the people.
Allow yourself a few minutes, the floor is yours.
Well that`s it from me. Thanks very much.
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