elmaxo
Anmeldungsdatum: 26.10.2013 Beiträge: 1
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Verfasst am: 26. Okt 2013 16:53 Titel: Textanalyse einer Darstellung des Traumjobs |
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Meine Frage:
Hallo;
in Englisch sollte ich einen Text über meinen Traumjob schreiben. Bitte guckt euch den Text einmal an und schreibt mir wenn ihr Grammatik, Ausdruck oder inhaltliche Fehler findet.
Ich danke im Vorraus.
Liebe Grüße
Meine Ideen:
In my dream job a Junior Buisness Analyst I want to join a Trade Management and Risk team. This job contains a lot of different requirements. Due to in this job you have every day othter problems. You need in-depth knowledge and experience of Risk for analyse the Risks correctly. Furthermore you have to be creative to find solutions for your analysed problems.
The Job involves a lot of responsability for documenting buisness requirements and working with IT teams to ensure a timely delivery of bank transactions. If you make one mistake it could be that million of pounds get lost.On the other hand you need softskills for communication in a team or present your working results in a meeting. |
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