Textkorrektur

Foxor · Gast

Hi! Könnt ihr bitte den folgenden Text auf Grammatikfehler überprüfen?

What this story makes a funny story, is the fact that aliens think that humans are only insist of meat. But we, as humans know that there is more as only meat. That makes those story a funny story.

Nr. 1
We assume about the aliens that they are green, small creatures without bones. They travelled in the space with a UFO which looks like a plate.

Nr.5
The authors intention is to make clearly that creatures like aliens exist. But this creatures know so much about humans like humans about aliens an this isn t very much.

Gast

wäre nett, wenn jemand mal im drüberlesen könnte und mir die fehler korrigirt Hilfe

Fox0r · Gast

warum hilft mir den niemand und korrigiert meinen Text wenn was falschs ein sollte? Andere Texte werden doch auch korrigiert? grübelnd

nymphadora · Gast

hab nichts an fehlern gefunden
smile

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389

Hi, hier mein Korrekturvorschlag Augenzwinkern

Nr. 1
We assume about the aliens that they are green, small creatures without bones. They travelled in the space with a UFO which looks like a plate.

We assume about aliens (ohne the, da es sich um diese allgemein handelt) that they are green small creatures (kein Komma, zusammenhängender Ausdruck) without bones. They travelled in space (auch kein the) with an UFO which looks like a plate.

Nr.5
The authors intention is to make clearly that creatures like aliens exist. But this creatures know so much about humans like humans about aliens an this isn t very much.

The authors intention is to reveal (deutlich machen) that creatures like aliens do exist. But these creatures know as much about humans as humans know about aliens, and this isn't very much.

LG Ulli Wink

Fox0r · Gast

besten dank Big Laugh

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389