Ich sollte eine Rede schreiben

Honig · Anmeldungsdatum: 14.02.2013 Beiträge: 2

Meine Frage:
Hey. könntet ihr hier vllt mal drüber schauen und mir sagen, was ich noch verbessern könnte, wäre echt super lieb (:

Meine Ideen:
Ladies and gentlemen,
today I am here to give a speech about the globalization of our earth. At first I should give a little definition about globalization. Globalization refers to the change in the global economy, which leads to cross-border-transactions. A good example would be the fact, that many groceries are imported by poorer countries, for example the third world countries, which exported many groceries to get money or other revenue. They accept that their population must starve. This valued ladies and gentlemen is an important point for me and so I want to give you a little insight into the globalization and the consequences: after the financial crisis now the food crisis? The fact is that the globalization has saved many people out of starvation and poverty.
But the problem now is that they have a higher kind of economic status. And so the demands on food and energy increase. The demand rise and the offer can?t stand the pace; as a result the price goes up. But this leads again to crisis. Who then has not enough money, must be limited to the minimum. Villages in poor countries don?t get enough food; many people are suffering from famine. The problem will start at the scratch.
But what can we do? Every day a hundred thousand people die, because of hunger and the consequences. I mean, it is not like there wouldn´t be enough for all the circular six billions people all over the world. No, there is enough food for circa twelve billions people, nearly the twice as much of the world?s population. Twelve billions people can ingest two thousand seven hundred calories a day. But this is not the reality. You see, that so many people must pass away, because they starved. A child which died because of hunger was killed.
My question is what can we do to give people a better life without hunger and poverty? How can we change their lives? We should help, but how?
I think that we should merely eat our calories of daily living. Not only you and me. No, if we would change their life, everyone must help. Two thousand seven hundred calories are sufficient. Germany, America, Great Britain, Spain, and Greece every country can help.
If everyone have two thousand seven hundred calories a day, would there not more illnesses because of domination and no one must die because of hunger. However, not everyone surrender his economic status. How do you say so beautiful?Everyone is himself the next.
Ladies and gentlemen, with that in mind I would like to adopt me now. I hope I was able to give you a little insight in the globalization and the consequences. Think about what I have said and change your eating habit, for poor children in the third world countries, because they must die because we are living beyond our means. So my wish to you, help to fight against the hunger.
I wish you have a pleasant day.
Thank you and goodbye.

gast15 · Gast

today I am here to give a speech about globalization earth. At first I want to give a brief definition of globalization. Globalization refers to the change in the global economy, which leads to cross-border-transactions. A good example is the fact that a lot of groceries are imported by poorer countries, for example third -world countries, which exported a lot of groceries to receive money or other revenue. In doing so they accept that their population suffers from starvation. This, dear ladies and gentlemen ,is an important aspect for me to give you some insight into globalization and its consequences: Is there now a the food crisis after the financial crisis ? The fact is that globalization has saved lots of people from starvation and poverty.
But the problem now is that they enjoy a higher kind of economic status. And so demand for food and energy is increasing. So demand cannot keep up with supply ; as a result prices go up. But this , of course, brings about conflicts. Those who don´t have enough money must be restricted to a minimum. Villages in poor countries don`t get enough food; many people are suffering from famine. The problem will start from scratch.
But what can we do? Every day one hundred thousand people die of hunger and its consequences. I mean, it is not as if there was not enough food for all the almost six billions people all over the world. No, there would be enough food for about twelve billions people, nearly the twice as much as today´s world?s population. Twelve billions people could be provided with two thousand seven hundred calories a day. But this is not reality. You see, that so many people must pass away because they die of starvazion. A child which died of hunger should be considered killed.
My question is what can we do to enable people to live a better life without hunger and poverty? How can we change their lives? We should help, but how?
I think that we should merely eat as many alories as we daily need . Not only you and me. No, if we want to change the lives ot those mentioned, everyone must help. Two thousand seven hundred calories are sufficient. Germany, America, Great Britain, Spain, and Greece every country can contribute to helping the poor.
If everyone have two thousand seven hundred calories a day, there would not be more illnesses because of domination (??? Sinn?) and no one would have to die because of hunger. However, not everyone is willing to give up his or her economic status. There is a saying:Everyone looks after himself first.
Ladies and gentlemen, with that in mind I would like to adopt (Sinn ???) me now. I hope I was able to give you a little insight in globalization and its consequences. Please,think about what I have said and change your eating habits for the benefit of the poor children in the third-world countries, because they must die because we live in affluency. So my I would like to ask you to support the fight against hunger.
I wish you have a pleasant day.

Honig · Anmeldungsdatum: 14.02.2013 Beiträge: 2

du hast echt nur diesen teil zu bemängeln?? Find ich gut Augenzwinkern

also zur Erklärung der Textstellen..:
If everyone have two thousand seven hundred calories a day, there would not be more illnesses because of domination (??? Sinn?)- sollte heißen: wenn jeder 2700 kalorien am tag isst, würde es keine Krankheiten wegen Übergewicht mehr geben.

Ladies and gentlemen, with that in mind I would like to adopt (Sinn ???)-sollte heißen: sehr geehrte Damen und Herren, mit diesem Gedanken möchte ich mich nun verabschieden

gast15 · Gast

Übergewicht= overweight

sich verabschieden = to say goodbye/ to take my leave

MI · Administrator Anmeldungsdatum: 22.01.2005 Beiträge: 1140 Wohnort: München

wobei in dem Kontext vermutlich besser von "obesity" zu sprechen wäre. Außerdem: "He, she, it, das 's' muss mit", bitte beachten Augenzwinkern

. (everyone ist dritte Singular).

Gruß
MI