Eurocom Coca-Cola

baby_blue · Anmeldungsdatum: 25.11.2011 Beiträge: 1

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Hätte jemand vielleicht ein wenig Zeit diesen Text zu kontrollieren und zu verbessern ? Wäre ziemlich nett. smile

Good Morning Mrs. Xxxx and Mr. Xxxx

Today i will talk about Coca Cola. At first I will tell you something about the history. Then i would like to go on to the bottles of coca cola , after that i would like to tell you something about Coca Cola today and forgeries of Cola and finally I will show you the different coca cola varieties.

At first I want to tell you about the History of Coca Cola. The history began in 1886, when the doctor and pharmacist John Stith Pemberton (BILD) in Atlanta a remedy for painful and tiredness developed. Whith it was the formal for Coke arised. Before the Inventor of Cola was died, he was selling the rights of coca cola to the businessman Asa Candler for only 2,300 Dollars. He founded 1892 ?The Coca Cola Company? in Atlanta. In 1916 was the design for the bottle at the ?Roat Glass Company? designed.
?The bottle with the hip swing?(BILD) is until today that unmistakable trademark of Coca Cola. 1929 came Coke also to Germany. The Coca Cola GmbH in Essen was founded.

Now I will tell you something about the difficult bottles. The first bottle was ?the bottle with the hip-swing? what I had show you earlier.
(BILD)Here on this pictures are the difficult bottles from 1920 to 1975. Today they looks for example so (BILD). But today gives a lot of difficult bottles. In Las Vegas gives a museum, where is a building of the biggest Coca Cola bottle (BILD).

At next I will talk about Coca Cola today. Coke ist until today a very famous drink. The Coca Cola GmbH doesn't produces only Coca Cola but also drinks like Sprite and Fanta. (BILD)
They has also a sport tradition. In 1928 has Cola at thr first time shared on the Olympic Games. Today squired Coke all kinds of sports and promote this.
Very popular is Coke on Christmas, because of the much decoration products (BILD), zhe Coke Trucks (BILD), and the famous Santa Claus (BILD) , who charmed all people every year. Even the one time blue Santa Claus (BILD) is by Coke red become, how we know him today.
This year was a very special year for Coca Cola, because they celebrated theirs 125 Jubilee. Since 1886 will Coke produced how J.S. Pemberton had it done.

Eurocom coca cola · Gast

sind ein paar rechtschreibfehler dabei z.b. whith (sollte warscheinlich with heißen)
versuch nicht so viele Jahreszahlen einzubauen (musst du nur alle auswendig lernen) versuchs mit x jahre später oder einfach nur das candler eine coca cola company gegründet hat, die jahreszahl vergessen die lehrer eh wieder.
achtung, coke bedeutet eig Kokain übersetzt, überleg dir ob du nicht vllt einfach nur cola sagst statt coke.
Zu zeitformen oder sonstiges kann ich leider nichts sagen da ich die selber nicht gut kann. ich werde meine von privatlehrern überprüfen (habe das gleiche thema wie du) vllt findest du ja auch eine möglichkeit dir schlaue hilfe zu holen. viel glück bei der prüfung Thumbs up!