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BeitragVerfasst am: 21. Mai 2011 20:26    Titel: Korrieren Antworten mit Zitat

Meine Frage:

Natural Disasters:

If a change in the earth's surface or atmosphere is created naturally, we speak of a natural disaster. It has on living creatures and their environment devastating. A spectacular natural event such as a glacier demolition in Greenland is not enough to become a natural disaster, but is always dependent on the various components of course climate change.
However, if people are the cause of the disaster, it is called an environmental disaster. Wars, civil wars and armed conflicts are also not counted on natural disasters.


Jobs

Everyone should have a job in our world.
It gives different types of work. For examble: Volunteering - a form of voluntary work,
Custom work - an activity with which the human living can be challenged. Or Forced Labor, which is forced to a person under threat of a penalty against his desire.


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BeitragVerfasst am: 22. Mai 2011 22:52    Titel: Re: Korrieren Antworten mit Zitat

Ein paar Anmerkungen meinerseits:

Tobi23 hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Meine Frage:
Natural Disasters:

If a change in the earth's surface or atmosphere is created naturally, we speak of a natural disaster. It has a devastating effect on living creatures and their environment. Satzstellung + Zeit. A spectacular natural event such as a glacier demolition in Greenland is not enough to become a natural disaster, but is always dependent on the various components of course climate change. Der Satz hat einfach keinen Sinn - was möchtest du sagen?
However, if people are the cause of the disaster, it is called an environmental disaster. Wars, civil wars and armed conflicts are also not counted as natural disasters.

Jobs

Everyone should have a job in our world.
There are different types of work. Absolute basics: "Es gibt" entspricht "There are" For example: Volunteering - a form of voluntary work,
Custom work - an activity with which the human living can be challenged. Eine Aktivität, mit der das menschliche Leben vor Herausforderungen gestellt wird? grübelnd Or Forced Labor, which a person is forced to do under threat of a penalty against his desire. Satzstellung: Die Arbeit kann nicht zwingen, jemand muss zwingen, daher kann die Arbeit nicht das Subjekt sein.
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