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ruri14
Anmeldungsdatum: 28.11.2010 Beiträge: 63 Wohnort: Tirol
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Verfasst am: 09. März 2011 11:03 Titel: Bitte die Sätze korrigieren. |
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Meine Frage:
Es wäre lieb, wenn mir mal jemand die Sätze korrigieren könnte, oder andere Vorschläge machen könnte!
Danke!
Meine Ideen:
Aufgabenstellung:
Read each spelling word and the dictionary information given about it. Write a sentence of you own using each word as the part of speech indicated.
(2) relic: an object surviving from the distant past
This is the relic from yesterday.
(3) decline: a slow weakening in strength, character, or value
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(4) cord: several twisted-together fibers; a thick string
Simson was bounded with cords.
(5) prick: to pierce slightly with a sharp, pointed object
I pricked me with a needle.
(6) affect: to influence; to impress
In a normal school are many bad affects.
(7) caravan: a group of merchants or others traveling together
You find many caravans in the desert.
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(9) focus: to form a sharp, clear image
His focus is to study medicine.
(10) ache: a dull, steady pain
My leg ache.
(11) cleanse: to make clean
He has to cleanse up his room.
(12) accuse: to charge with blame or fault
He accused her, but it wasn't right.
(13) knock: to strike something with a sharp blow
I knock at the door.
(14) flicker: to shine or burn with an unsteady light
The candle flickers.
(15) welcome: to receive or greet gladly and kindly
Welcome to Austria.
(16) detect: to notice the presence of or to discover
He detect the thief.
(17) socket: a hollow part for holding something
The ball is in the socket. (Bei einem Knochen )
(18 ) craft: a type of work requiring a special skill
Carpenter, that's a craft.
(19) aspect: the way something appears to the eye or mind
Thats my aspect.
(20) suck: to draw into or from
A baby sucks from the breast.
(21) traffic: the coming and going of people, vehicles, planes, or ships
At the highway is much traffic.
(22) colossal: extremly large; huge
This is a colossal mine!
(23) doctrine: a particular principle tought and believed
The phythagorean theaream is a doctrine.
(24) duct: a tube for a fluid or other substances
My toothpaste is in a duct. |
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Anmeldungsdatum: 22.01.2005 Beiträge: 1140 Wohnort: München
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Verfasst am: 10. März 2011 20:22 Titel: Re: Bitte die Sätze korrigieren. |
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ruri14 hat Folgendes geschrieben: |
(2) relic: an object surviving from the distant past
This is the relic from yesterday.
Mhh... "distant past" und "yesterday" passt meiner Meinung nach nicht. Wie sieht's zum Beispiel aus mit: "This puppet is a relic from my early childhood" - in dem Sinne von "Überbleibsel" schon einmal benutzt.
(3) decline: a slow weakening in strength, character, or value
Recently, we observe a decline in unemployment rates.
Gerade bei Statistiken ist das ein sehr häufig verwandtes Wort.
(4) cord: several twisted-together fibers; a thick string
Simson was tied with cords.
"bound" hat meist einen leicht andere Bedeutung, wäre aber möglich. Wenn, dann aber mit "bound" statt "bounded" (bind ist unregelmäßig)
(6) affect: to influence; to impress
In a normal school are many bad affects.
Nein, "affect" ist ein Verb, "effect" ist das Subjekt.
Also eher:
Climate changes also affect the weather.
(9) focus: to form a sharp, clear image
His focus lies on studying medicine.
(10) ache: a dull, steady pain
My leg aches.
Das sieht aber so aus, als ob hier das Substantiv gemeint wäre.
(11) cleanse: to make clean
He has to cleanse his room.
Gerade ohne "up".
(16) detect: to notice the presence of or to discover
He detects the thief.
(21) traffic: the coming and going of people, vehicles, planes, or ships
On the highway, there is much traffic.
(23) doctrine: a particular principle tought and believed
The pythagorean theorem is a doctrine.
Nicht wirklich, weil Pythagoras beweisbar ist. Nimm eher eine religiöse Sache. Zum Teil ist doctrine aber auch pejorativ im Sinne des deutschen "indoktrinieren".
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Habe mal ein paar Dinge korrigiert und einige Anmerkungen gemacht.
Gruß
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ruri14
Anmeldungsdatum: 28.11.2010 Beiträge: 63 Wohnort: Tirol
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Verfasst am: 11. März 2011 09:37 Titel: |
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Danke dir MI! |
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