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Eddy²
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 Verfasst am: 28. Apr 2010 14:58 Titel: Writing a report on a film - correct it please ;) (Bitte kor |
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Meine Frage:
Hallo Leute 
Ich muss für die Schule einen Report über einen Film schreiben. Das hab ich jetzt gemacht, bin mir aber sicher gramattische Fehler drinzuhaben. Wär nett wenn mir den Text jemand korrigieren könnte!
Vielen Dank im vorraus! (Verbesserungsvorschläge nehme ich auch gerne an)
Hier der Text:
Meine Ideen:
I´d like to tell you about a film I saw in the cinema some weeks ago.
It´s a very exciting science-fiction film called "Avatar".
The film was written, produced and directed by James Cameron,
one of the most famous American directors.
James Cameron is also known for his romantic drama film "Titanic",
which was the most successful film before Avatar was released.
In the Year 1994 Cameron wrote a script for the film. It was 80 pages long.
On the 17th and 18th December Avatar was broadcasted all over the World!
The Actors Stephen Lang, Sam Worthington, Zoe Saladana, Michelle Rodriguez and Sigourney Weaver were starred.
The adorable theme song "I see you" was sung by Leona Lewis.
With sales of 2,721 billion dollars Avatar became moneywise the most successful film ever! The film shows us how greedy Humans are, and how they destroy everything that stands between them and the money.
The whole story begins when the main character Jake Sully has to go for a dangerous mission: Controlling an artificial Na´vi, one of the natives of the Planet Pandora, he has to win the trust of the Na´vi. That is the only way to make them leave their home. The humans' target is unobtanium,
a very expensive natural resource, which can be found under the earth where the Na´vi are living. During his Mission Jake meets a gorgeous Na´vi girl called Neytiri and falls in love with her. Neytiri shows him how the Na´vi are living. The friendly lifestyle of the Na´vi and their love to the nature affected Jake deeply.
He wants to help Neytiri and the people to combat the Humans, who meanwhile are trying to run the Na´vi off with Weapons. A big battle between the Humans and the Na´vi accrues. In the end Jake and the People accomplish to defeat the Humans! Lastly, with the aid of Eyva, the nature deity of the Na´vi, Jake becomes one of the Na´vi.
To give you an insight into the Film, I would like to show you a short extract out of the final film script, which is 152 pages long. This is a scene in the middle of the film, where Jake Sully and Neytiri are climbing on the Floating Mountains to choose an Ikran for Jake. An Ikran is a flying creature, that looks a little bit like an dinosaur. The Na´vi are using the Ikrans to fly on them while hunting.
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Avatar is clearly the best film I've ever seen.
I´d definitely recommend watching it, because of its sweeping Story,
the stunning special effects and its important message.
I watched it in 3D, and it's just awesome! |
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| Verfasst am: 02. Mai 2010 23:05 Titel: Re: Writing a report on a film - correct it please ;) (Bitte |
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| Eddy² hat Folgendes geschrieben: |
I´d ich würde das nicht so abgekürzt schreiben. man spricht vielleicht im alltag so, aber in der schule gehört das ausgeschrieben like to tell you about a film I saw in the cinema some weeks ago.
It´s a very exciting science-fiction film called "Avatar".
The film was written, produced and directed by James Cameron,
one of the most famous American directors.
James Cameron is also known for his romantic drama film "Titanic",
which was the most successful film before until Avatar was released.
In the Year 1994 Cameron wrote a script for the film. It was 80 pages long.
On the 17th and 18th December 2009 Avatar was broadcasted all over the World!
The Actors Stephen Lang, Sam Worthington, Zoe Saladana, Michelle Rodriguez and Sigourney Weaver were starred.
The adorable theme song "I see you" was is - tut sie ja immer noch sung by Leona Lewis.
With sales of 2,721 billion dollars Avatar became moneywise the most successful film ever! The film shows us how greedy Humans wobei, wenn man die menschen hier als Rasse betrachtet hast du wohl recht... groß schreiben are, and how they destroy everything that stands between them and the money.
The whole story begins when the main character Jake Sully has to go for a dangerous mission: Controlling an artificial Na´vi, one of the natives of the Planet Pandora, he has to win the trust of the Na´vi. That is the only way to make them leave their home. The humans' target is unobtanium,
a very expensive natural resource, which can be found under the earth where the Na´vi are living. During his Mission Jake meets a gorgeous Na´vi girl called Neytiri and falls in love with her. Neytiri shows him how the Na´vi are living. The friendly lifestyle of the Na´vi and their love to the nature affecteds Jake deeply.
He wants to help Neytiri and the people to combat the Humans, who meanwhile are trying to run the Na´vi off with Weapons. A big battle between the Humans and the Na´vi accrues. In the end Jake and the People accomplish to defeat the Humans! Lastly, with the aid of Eyva, the nature deity of the Na´vi, Jake becomes one of the Na´vi.
To give you an insight into the Film, I would like to show you a short extract out of the final film script, which is 152 pages long. This is a scene in the middle of the film, where Jake Sully and Neytiri are climbing on the Floating Mountains to choose an Ikran for Jake. An Ikran is a flying creature, that looks a little bit like an dinosaur. The Na´vi are using the Ikrans to fly on them while hunting.
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Avatar is clearly the best film I've ever seen.
I´d ganz weglassen, du würdest nicht nur weiterempfehlen, du empfiehlst weiter definitely recommend watching it, because of its sweeping Story,
the stunning special effects and its important message.
I watched it in 3D, and it's was just awesome! |
Na, hier war ja gar nix zu korrigieren  Guter Ausdruck.  |
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