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Caro93 · Anmeldungsdatum: 29.03.2010 Beiträge: 1

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Habe am Mittwoch eine mündliche Englisch Prüfung und weiß nicht ob dieser Text so richtig ist

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1961 Liza Minnelli was taken to the New York High School of Performing Arts and gained his first acting experience in a number of productions of the Cape Cod Melody Theater in Hyannis. On a tour of the United States, which was later continued in Israel and Europe, she played the title role in the play The Diary of Anne Frank. In 1962, she applied at the request of their parents at the Sorbonne in Paris, remained there only a short time because it was not accepted as an American there.
With many well-known TV appearances followed its reputation, especially in 1963 with guest appearances in two episodes of the extremely popular Judy Garland Show at the side of her mother. At the age of 17, she first met the French singer Charles Aznavour, who was to promote her musical career. Minnelli took on some of his songs and was later also give joint concerts with him.
Liza Minnelli in 1963 began a study acting at the Herbert Berghof Studio in New-York City, and chose this city from now on to their place of residence.She received her first role in the musical Best Foot Forward at the Off-Broadway, for which she won as a junior talent with the Theater World Award. A short time later, her tour. by which it was known in 1964 as an actress and also about the environment of New York.
Encouraged by their success on the stage they were in November 1964 a joint concert with her mother Judy Garland, from which came out a joint live album and that was also broadcast on television. First, Minnelli had not trusted to be able to coexist with her mother, however, confidence in focus than it had been praised by the latter. From then on, Judy Garland was also a competitor in her daughter.
Liza Minnelli transformed awards in her acting career folgenede:
1 Oscar for Cabaret (1973)
3 David di Donatello (1970,1973,2002)
1 emmy (1973)
1 Golden Apple Award (1972)
1 golden globe award (1973)
1 golden raspberry (1989)
1 golden kamara (1990)
2 Grammy Awards (1990.2008)
3 Tony awards (1965,1974,1978)
They also have gotten a star in the category stage on hollywood boulevard in 1991.

Today is Liza Minnelli by some operation no longer fully active in theater and limited by two artificial hips, in her acting but as she puts it, as long as it allows her body, she will do the things that she just does. Liza Minnelli is, indeed, still on stage or in front of the camera. For the last time before the camera until now, in 2008.