MOTIVATION LETTER KORREKTUR!!!! DRINGEND

Tina · Anmeldungsdatum: 21.03.2010 Beiträge: 1

Meine Frage:
Hey,

also ich bin in absoluter Zeitnot.. Bin erst vor ca. 5 Tagen aus Australien gekommen und will mich für eine Hochschule in amsterdam bewerben. Da sganze muss ich schon in 3 Tagen abschicken. Zum einen wäre das der Motivationletter und dann noch ein paar weitere kleine Fragen, die ich beantworten musste. Ich muss ganz ehrlich zugeben, dass ich glaube das es ziemlich shclechtes und einfaches englisch ist, ich muss allerdings noch ein ganzes protfolio erstellen..

Vielen lieben Dank!!!!!!

Meine Ideen:
Motivaitonletter:

Dear Madam or Sir,

Hereby I would like to express my motivation for studying International Fashion and Mangament at AMFI.

After graduating from school in June 2009 I went to Australia to do Work & Travel for 5 months.
This international experience helped me to strengthen my English skills and to figure out what I want to do in my future. Additionally it encouraged me to live and study abroad.
In April I will start an internship for 3 months at a fashion company, which is called Lotte Voss. I am looking forward to see the progress behind the production of a fashion collection. I also want to have previous knowledge before I will start my studying.

Fashion was always one of my biggest interests and I still like everything about it. I like the fact that it is variegated and you can use is to express your feelings.
Furthermore I am very interested in business and I took it as an advanced course in school.
I like the mixture between the creative and the business part and therefore I think AMFI is the right Institute for me.

One of the reasons why I decided to apply for AMFI is, that it is international and that I have the oppotunity to start my career as a fashion manager worldwide. Furthermore I still want to improve my English skills and to meet people from different nations and I think Amsterdam is the right place for that.
Amsterdam is a beautiful city with many international students. It would give me the opportunity to learn the Dutch language and to get an impression of the Dutch culture.
Furthermore there is no comparable programme in Germany except in private Universities.
In my opinion one of the best thing at AMFI is that they help you to develop your own talents and that you get an impression of the different parts of the fashion industry.
Another reason why I chose AMFI is, that it is a four year programme and that they support you to do an internship. I am sure that AMFI is possible to teach me everything I have to know for becoming a professional and successful fashion manager
As a conclusion I think AMFI is one of the best fashion schools in the world and I would like to become a student there.

There are different things I expect from the course. In my foundation year I hope to develop my creativity.
I expect that the course shows me what my talents are and that you get support for the things you have to do for example the preparing of a business plan. I am still not sure what exactly I want to do after graduation and I hope that the course helps me to find this out during my studying.

At the moment I could imagine to work for a fashion magazine or for the organisation of fashion shows after graduation. It is also possible that I maybe want to work as a production manager. I am still very flexible with this decision.

Yours faithfully

Die Fragen:

1. Which activities have you undertaken recently, and what kind of information and / or inspiration have they given you? (Think of visits to the theatre, a museum, a trade fair, or a city; films, books, and activities.)

I did Work & Travel in Australia for 5 months. I made this trip to find myself and to develop in my personality. During my stay I visited so many beautiful places, met a lot of new people and learned about new culture. Living in Melbourne and Sydney inspired me so much. Walking through the streets in those big cities and just to see all the different people from everywhere with extraordinary styles was something new for me. The people inspired me to be more confident in my behaviour and especially my style. It just showed me that you can dare it to wear everything you like and that you can combine the most different colours, materials and forms. All in all Australia helped me to be more confident in all the things I do. Travelling on your own means that you have to figure out all situations by your own, even it seems impossible sometimes and you think it can?t be worse. I learned to handle those situations and to be patient.

2.What inspires you? Send at least 3 photographs with this form and explain your choice. Don?t forget to number the photos on the back!

Photo 1: I like the contrast of this photo. In the background you can see the harsh graffiti in ghoulish colours and it reminds me at the youth. In my opinion the bicycle stands for childhood and the pink colour for happiness. The fact that this actually doesn?t fit inspires me, because it shows that you can combine everything like you want. And sometimes this is how you can get the best combinations.

Photo 2: I?ve chosen that picture because it makes me happy. It seems like the laughing girl in the background has so much lust for life. Furthermore I just admire clowns and it always reminds me at my childhood. Wearing a costume means playing a new role and you can turn into someone else. Also I think that this has something to do with fashion, because customs can change your mood. This is the reason why this photo inspires me.

Photo 3: I took this photo at a friend?s place. Of course I like shoes and it?s amazing how many different shoes there are. I?m inspired by all the people who think of the different designs and colours and all the work behind the production of shoes. But the main reason why this photo inspires me is that my friend still can control this chaos.

Photo 4: This photo is from my trip in Australia in the Blue mountains. The whole landscape, the mountains, the waterfalls, the weather it all stands for rest. The body position is consistent with the nature. For me personally it stands for peace of mind and I just admire this place and I love to remember this day.

3.Do you have experience in any of the following areas: purchasing / sales / clothing production, digital skills, management, or organization? Tell us about it.

I will start an internship for a fashion company, which is called Lotte Voss Faktorei, on the 15th of April until the 31st of July. This is the reason why I can?t tell about my experiences yet, but the following tasks are intended for me: to administrate the internet store, being the contact person for (new) customers, working/supporting on the development of the new collection, making appointments with PR agencies and arranging the photo shooting for the new catalogue.