Text in Englisch übersetzen

XxIch-bin-IchxX · Anmeldungsdatum: 15.02.2010 Beiträge: 3 Wohnort: Baden-Württemberg

Ich muss ein Text über meine Sommerferien schreiben. Und ich bin mir nicht sicher, ob es gut ist. Ich habe bestimmt in manchen Stellen grammatische Fehler.

Hier ist der Text:

In summerholidays I was in Europapark. It was funny there. I have ridden eyeryall. Most fanniest were "Euro Mir" and "Euro Sat". Tey´re railways. They´re the same fast. One of them was inside of the big bullet. It was dark when my brother and I had ridden. But there was lightradiates. I have fun and it was funny for me.

I was in Schluchsee, too. My family and I have ridden pedalboots. It was easy to start, but a long time was difficult for me. I´m not alone to kick. I rode with my brother. And sometimes changed I with my father. There was a small island. You can camp there. But we haven´t camp, because the weather wasn´t good.

Ich habe noch mehr Texte geschrieben, aber diese Texte sind vielleicht viele Fehler drin. Ich freue mich auf eure Verbesserungsvoschläge und eure Kritik.

Danke im Vorraus smile

XxIch-bin-IchxX · Anmeldungsdatum: 15.02.2010 Beiträge: 3 Wohnort: Baden-Württemberg

*auf Englisch übersetzen

Snowcat · Gast

hi..

ich bin so zusagen ein englisch genie..hier ist dein text fehlerfrei:

In summerholidays i was in Europapark. It was funny there. I have ridden everyall. Most fanniest were "Euro Mir" and "Euro Sat". They´re railways. They´re the same fast. One of them was inside of the big bullet. It was dark when my brother and i had ridden. But there was lightradiates. I have fun and it was funny for me.

I was in Schluchsee, too. My family and i have ridden pedalboots. It was easy to start, but a long time was difficult for me. I´m not alone to kick. I rode with my brother. And i´m sometimes changed with my father. There was a small island. You can camp there. But we haven´t camp, because the weather was not so good.

ich hoffe bekommst eine gute note;)