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Lozano
Anmeldungsdatum: 11.02.2010
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 Verfasst am: 11. Feb 2010 21:47 Titel: Letter of Motivation |
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Hallo,
ich hoffe ich bin hier richtig!
Ich muss einen letter of motivation schreiben und wollte fragen ob der so in Ordnung ist! Die ***-Sternchen sind Platzhalter für persönliche Daten.. man kann ja nie wissen...
Vielen Dank im Voraus!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hereby wish to indicate my interest in studying my semester abroad at the university i***.
My name is *** and I am a student at the university of applied sciences in ***, currently studying „Digital Media“ in the 3rd semester. I have always been fascinated by the possibilities of digital communication and multimedia design. Therefore I started to study „Digital Media“ at the university of applied sciences in *** and had a lot of fun with creating different designs or interfaces for different purposes so far.
The „Digital Media“ programme at our university states that it is obligatory to have a semester abroad at a university of our choice. After doing some research in the internet by visiting your homepage for example, I would like to spend my semester abroad at your institution. My desire to study „Bellas Artes“ at the university *** absolutely reflects my personal interests. I am sure that the course offer answers my expectations and that I will match up to the different courses.
Another reason for my choice , besides the reputation of the university, is the location. I like to meet new people and get to know new cultures. As a portuguese I am familiar to the latin lifestyle. In school I had spanish classes and did very well, therefore I do not think that I would have problems with adapting myself.
Bearing in mind what my interests and qualifications are and what the university *** has to offer, I feel enthusiastic and able to undertake this challenge. I assure you that, if you offer me a place at your university, I will work hard and fulfill your expectations.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. |
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| Verfasst am: 15. Feb 2010 00:25 Titel: Re: Letter of Motivation |
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I hereby wish to state my interest in studying my semester abroad at the university i***. Wenn schon diese Form, dann vermutlich besser mit "state", das habe ich schon des Öfteren gesehen. Vllt. wäre es sinnvoll, hier auch "a semester abroad" zu wählen, da du ja erst später erklärst, dass es für euch verpflichtend ist.
My name is *** and I am a student at the university of applied sciences in ***, currently studying „Digital Media“ in the 3rd semester. I have always been fascinated by the possibilities of digital communication and multimedia design. Therefore I started to study „Digital Media“ at the university of applied sciences in *** and had a lot of fun with creating different designs or interfaces for different purposes so far.
The „Digital Media“ programme at our university states that it is obligatory to have a semester abroad at a university of our choice. After having done some research on the internet, where I visited you website for example, I became interested in spending my semester abroad at your institution. Hier ein Vorschlag. In jedem Fall ist es "on the internet". Insgesamt erschien mir der Satz irgendwie nach dem Motto "Tja, hab ich halt mal was gesucht und die Uni da scheint ganz ok zu sein" - für einen Letter of Motivation evtl. nicht ganz so gut, auch wenn du danach natürlich weiter ausholst. My desire to study „Bellas Artes“ at the university *** absolutely reflects my personal interests. I am sure that the course offer answers my expectations and that I will match up to the different courses.
Another reason for my choice, besides the reputation of the university, is the location. I like to meet new people and get to know new cultures. As a Portuguese I am familiar to the latin lifestyle. In school I had Spanish classes and did very well, therefore I do not think that I would have problems with adapting myself.
Bearing in mind what my interests and qualifications are and what the university *** has to offer, I feel enthusiastic and able to undertake this challenge. Der Satz klingt etwas seltsam. Hättest du da vielleicht eine andere Idee? I assure you that, if you offer me a place at your university, I will work hard and fulfill your expectations.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. |
Gruß
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