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 Verfasst am: 05. Okt 2009 17:45 Titel: Praktikumsreferat bitte korrigieren. Wichtig :( Bitte bitte. |
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Hallo,
Erstmal stell ich mich mal vor 
Ich heiße Andre Heuer und komme auf Frankfurt!
Bin leider unter Zeitdruck, deshalb die kurze Vorstellung! Tut mir leid 
Jetzt zum eigentlichen Thema.
Ich muss für die Schule einen Prakitkumsbesuch auf Englisch vorstellen, währe wirklich nett wenn ihr nach Fehlern suchen könntet. Ich muss dazu sagen das ich nicht die Bombe in Englisch bin!
Für Fehler währe ich dankbar!
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I made my internship at the lufthansa technik AG in Frankfurt. A typical day. I drive with my bike to the lufthansa technik entrance, and from the entrance to my workplace, names : "turbine overhauling". I must wear security clothes like security shoes, and a blue overall. To get a task, i must go to the personalchef. At these day I must help to repair a turbine casing from an Airbus A340. I work together with my colleague Michael. We start the work at 7 a clock. Michael gives me a headlight, because i must go inside of a turbine casing and screw off the turinebreakes. When the work has done, it lay more than 200 screws in a plastic bowl on the ground. It costs a lot of time. At half past 12 we made a lunch break. I have 2 breaks, the short break with 20 minutes at half past 9, and the long break with 40 minutes at half past 12, but mostly i made only the 40 minutes break like this day. When i get back on my workplace, Michael say to me: " I will show you the function of an Aircraft turbine". He give me a lot of paper, and describes me all of a turbine engine in a aircraft. Two hours later i knew a lot more about a turbine engine. At 2 o´clock I cleaned my workplace. All tools and equipment I have put in a tool chest. At half past 3 is closing time and I can go home.
Finally, the internship was a big experience, i have new pictures and sides to creat my future. But on a long time, the job was to
boring for me. I do not like technical work.
But at the end, I have seen new insights. |
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| Verfasst am: 05. Okt 2009 21:24 Titel: Re: Praktikumsreferat bitte korrigieren. Wichtig :( Bitte bi |
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Hallo und 
Ich habe mal einige Anmerkungen gemacht.
Gruß
MI
| frankfurt! hat Folgendes geschrieben: | I made my internship at the Lufthansa Technik AG in Frankfurt. Ich vermute, das wird großgeschrieben im Deutschen? Dann auch als Eigenname im Englischen. A typical day. Ist das eine Überschrift? Sonst liest's sich komisch I drive with my bike to the lufthansa technik entrance, and from the entrance to my workplace, which is called : "turbine overhauling". I must wear security clothes like security shoes, and a blue overall. To get my directives for the day, i must go to the personalchef (staff manager). Ich vermute, du bekommst vorwiegend Anweisungen, diese kenne ich als "directives", was dann schöner klingt. Außerdem ist die Frage, ob du solche deutschen Bezeichnungen verwenden sollst/darfst. On this day I must help to repair a turbine casing from an Airbus A340. I work together with my colleague Michael. We start the work at 7 a clock. Michael gives me a headlight, because i must go inside of a turbine casing and screw off the turbinebreakes. When the work is done, there are more than 200 screws in a plastic bowl on the ground. Du solltest dich zwischen Vergangenheit und Gegenwart entscheiden  It costs a lot of time. At half past 12 we have a lunch break. I have two breaks, a short break of 20 minutes at half past 9, and a long break of 40 minutes at half past 12, but most of the times, I only have the 40 minutes break like this day. When i get back to my workplace, Michael says to me: " I will show you the function of an aircraft turbine". He gives me a lot of paper and describes me everyting of a turbine engine in a aircraft. Two hours later I know a lot more about a turbine engine. At two o´clock I clean my workplace. I put all tools and equipment in a tool chest. At half past three I can go home. Der Satz mit dem Feierabend klingt sehr seltsam in meinen Augen. Eine wirkliche Alternative habe ich aber nicht (daher hier herausgenommen).
All in all, the internship was a great experience and I gained new insights, which will help me for my future career Hier ein Formulierungsvorschlag. Der Satz stimmt in deiner Form leider nicht ganz. But for a long time, the job was too boring for me. Warst du länger da? Sonst würde ich vorschlagen: "for a longer time, the job would be too boring" I do not like technical work.
But at the end, I have seen new insights. Das hast du doch eigentlich schon oben gesagt (zumindest im Kern). |
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