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BeitragVerfasst am: 19. Mai 2009 12:08    Titel: urban poetry Antworten mit Zitat

Entschuldigung leute, aber mein account wurde gelöscht, nun stelle ich das Gedicht noch mal rein..

unsere letzte klausur war über das thema "urban poetry"..

hier die lösungen zu Gareth Owen, out in the city:

1.(Einleitung): characters seem to be in a street, at an open-air market and on a bus in london; Hary sing a greeting to two other people; Billy is seling meat and fishh; maltese tony smokes and watchs the amusement arcade; impression conveyed is of a lively street scenario with the focus on various people doing sth. different; -->colourful picture

2.(analyse):
divided in stanzas; irregularmetric pattern; irregular rhyme; tone is light- hearted, personal and enthusiasticc.
ll.30-33: description of the impression the speaker perceives on the street to point out the multifaceted character of city life
ll.9-12: narration in which an incident recounted to convey the impresion that the speaker is directly talking to the reader and to make the scene appeare more lively
ll.22-29: direct speech to make the city scenario appear more immediate and vived
ll.1-8: personal adres (you) to make the reader feel directly involveed in the scene
l.30: apeal to sense of vision to add an additional dimension to the reader's perception
ll.6,21,3: apeal to sense hearing to reflect a perception of playing music
ll.7,35: appeal to sense of smell
ll.5,7: paralelism to emphasize the efect the musical feeling has on a person
ll.38,41: repetition to point out various preferences peolpe could have and finaly to stress the speaker's enthusiasm for the city
l.8: simile to highlight the enormity of the effect the city rhythm has on the body

3 (creative writing): hier war eine Wahlaufgabe, ich habe a) gewählt, da sollte man die vorteile und nachteile von life in big city aufschreiben:
vorteile: variety possibilities: shopping, cultural events. theatres etc.; some relaxtion and fresh air;vived atmosphere
nachteile: degree of pollution, noise, hectic close contact
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BeitragVerfasst am: 19. Mai 2009 12:15    Titel: hier das gedicht Antworten mit Zitat

When you're out in the city
Shuffling down the street
a bouncy city ryhtm
starts to boogle in your feet.

it jumps off the pavement
there's a snare drum in your brain
it pumps through your heart
like a diesel train

there's harry on the corner
sings, how she goin , boy?
to loose and easy winston
with his brother leroy

shout, hello! to billy brisket
with his tripes and cow's heels
blood-stained rabbits
and trays of live eels.

maltese tony
smoking in the shade
keeping one good eye
on the amousement acarde

and everybody's talking
>> move along
step this way
here's the bargain
what you say?
mind your backs
here's your stop
more fares?
boom on top. <<
nEON lights and take-aways
gangs of boys and girls
football crowds and market stalls
taxi cabs and noise

from the city cafés
on the smoky breeze
smells of indian cooking
greek and cantonese

well, some people like suburban life
some peope like the sea
others like countryside
but it's the city
yes it's the city
it's the city life
for me.


und sry für die rechtschreibfehler Augenzwinkern hatte nich so viel zeit smile
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