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tibhar_tiger
Anmeldungsdatum: 22.01.2007
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 Verfasst am: 22. Jan 2007 23:46 Titel: Bitte Bitte Korrigieren!! |
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Hi leute wir mussten so eine Text schreiben in english
Es wäre wirklich SUPER nett von euch, wenn ihr den mal korrigieren könntet... am besten noch heute oder morgen früh bis 7 Uhr, denn ich brauche den für die Schule morgen
Also das wäre echt klasse wenn das mal einer machen könnte, am liebsten noch heute.
Vielen Vielen Dank!!!!
es sind bestimmt noch einige fehler drinn , in grammatik und rechtschreibung. oder eventuelle sachliche verbesserungen, Wortwahl usw.
hier der text:
My first school day at the Martin Rinckart Gymnasium
As I get up in the morning at 5.30 am, I was quite tired, so I actually I don't want to got to school this morning but I have to to do it. At the breakfast I ate not much, just milk with cornflakes.
After that I watched nor a little bit TV. I was nervous going to school. Natural I had some hopes and wishes for the coming year. At 5 to half past 6 I went to the the busstation, and after 3 minutes he was already coming. I went with the others in the Bus behind, I sat down and relaxing, I was now still really tired, I switched on my mp3 player and looked out of the window. Approximately after 1 hour we arrived at the school, and my first mind was: uhh what is that??
The building looks like a accumulation full of stones, so the building is in a very bad status. We went out of the bus and we had to wait 5 minutes, before we could go in school. The I went in and saw at a blackboard where I have to go. I must went to the E13 ( intensive course German). I was full of hope that I meet some of my friends there. My tutor Mrs. Ludwig told us only organizational things. Then she read out the timetable and all students were curious which teacher they get in which subject. After these two lessons, I went to my next lesson and so on. All in all I enjoyed the day, I had a little bit luck with the teachers I got and all the students and teachers I meet where friendly and polite.
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ACH
Anmeldungsdatum: 26.01.2006
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| Verfasst am: 23. Jan 2007 09:13 Titel: |
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Tut mir Leid, aber da du es um 23:46 ins Netz gestellt hast hatte wohl niemand eine Moeglichkeit es sich bis 7 (!) anzuschauen. Wie auch !?
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Ulli
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| Verfasst am: 23. Jan 2007 10:07 Titel: Re: Bitte Bitte Korrigieren!! |
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| tibhar_tiger hat Folgendes geschrieben: | Hi leute wir mussten so eine Text schreiben in english
Es wäre wirklich SUPER nett von euch, wenn ihr den mal korrigieren könntet... am besten noch heute oder morgen früh bis 7 Uhr, denn ich brauche den für die Schule morgen
Also das wäre echt klasse wenn das mal einer machen könnte, am liebsten noch heute.
Vielen Vielen Dank!!!!
es sind bestimmt noch einige fehler drinn , in grammatik und rechtschreibung. oder eventuelle sachliche verbesserungen, Wortwahl usw.
hier der text:
My first school day at the Martin Rinckart Gymnasium
As I get up in the morning at 5.30 am, I was quite tired, so I actually I don't want to got to school this morning but I have to to do it. At the breakfast I ate not much, just milk with cornflakes.
After that I watched nor a little bit TV. I was nervous going to school. Natural I had some hopes and wishes for the coming year. At 5 to half past 6 I went to the the busstation, and after 3 minutes he was already coming. I went with the others in the Bus behind, I sat down and relaxing, I was now still really tired, I switched on my mp3 player and looked out of the window. Approximately after 1 hour we arrived at the school, and my first mind was: uhh what is that??
The building looks like a accumulation full of stones, so the building is in a very bad status. We went out of the bus and we had to wait 5 minutes, before we could go in school. The I went in and saw at a blackboard where I have to go. I must went to the E13 ( intensive course German). I was full of hope that I meet some of my friends there. My tutor Mrs. Ludwig told us only organizational things. Then she read out the timetable and all students were curious which teacher they get in which subject. After these two lessons, I went to my next lesson and so on. All in all I enjoyed the day, I had a little bit luck with the teachers I got and all the students and teachers I meet where friendly and polite.
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[quote]... am besten noch heute oder morgen früh bis 7 Uhr, denn ich brauche den für die Schule morgen [/quote]
Sorry, du bist hier in einem Hausaufgaben Board und nicht bei einem Übersetzungsinstitut.....btw wie ACH schon gepostet hat: ....und wenn wir das korrigieren sollen, dann musst du deine Texte bzw. Fragen wesentlich früher posten, dann klappts beim nächsten Mal besser. 
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tibhar_tiger
Anmeldungsdatum: 22.01.2007
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| Verfasst am: 23. Jan 2007 18:36 Titel: |
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ok, ist dumm gelaufen, ich hatte an die Ha nicht mehr gedacht es ist mir halt erst 23 Uhr eingefallen, da habe ich dann auch schnell angefangen den text zu schreiben.
naja schade, tut mir leid, bis bald |
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