Für die englisch Matura: I introduce myself!

hunsrus · Gast

Meine Frage:
Hallo liebe englischboard.de user,

werde mich morgen bei der mündlichen Englischprüfung
versuchen.

Die erste wichtige Hürde ist das Vorstellen seiner Person,
deswegen wäre es super wenn Ihr meinen Text kontrollieren könntet.

Danke im Voraus!

Meine Ideen:
At first at all, I would introduce myself. My name is Martin Fischer and I am twenty three years old.

I was born on the 9th of September in Oberwart a district from Burgenland. After I passed my high school in 2003 I attended a higher technical school.

But I had to accept that this school is too hard for me and so I started an apprenticeship, in the company ?Vermessung Meixner? as a land surveyor.
During the apprenticeship I worked very often on building sides and was also involved in drawing planes for them.

This education took three and a half year from my life before I finished. After that I trained by
the educational institute ?Wifi Wien? and passed the exam for ?CAD technician? as good as possible.
With that good note I got the workplace by the plumber company ?TGA? in which I work as CAD technician until now.

In 2011 on the eighth of July I got married my girlfriend Petra and three months later we got our daughter Emily.

I do the Matura for a better education and for more chances.

Trak · Gast

Hi wenn du alles korrekt sagen möchtest wären die Sätze so(nur falsche Sätze korregiert):

First of all, I would like to introduce myself.

...in Oberwart, which is a district of/city in Burgenland in the (north,south, etc) of (country).

...accept, that the school was too difficult for me...

During the apprenticeship, I worked on building suites very often and...

I spent three and a half years of my live on that education, after which I was trained by...and passed the .. with the best possible grade .

This helped me to get a workplace as a ..., in the plumber company ..., which is my current employment.

...got married to...

das müsste alles gewesen sein, lerns aber am besten nicht auswendig, sondern versuche die Punkte in dieser (guten) Struktur abzuarbeiten, ein bisschen persönlicher dürfte es auch sein (hobbies, was dir während der ausbildung besonders gefallen hat, was dir an deinem beruf gefällt, etc)

Trak · Gast

es muss natürlich of my life heissen Hammer

hunsrus · Gast

DANKE!!

Trak · Gast

hi vllt. liest du das ja noch...

wenn du nicht weisst, wie dein Job korrekt auf englisch heisst, dann finde die deutsche bezeichnung bei wikipedia und öffne dann die entsprechnde englische seite (sprachauswahl links), da müsste es korrekt stehen

viel erfolg beim gespräch