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Leah
Anmeldungsdatum: 03.09.2008 Beiträge: 38
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chocolate4ever

Anmeldungsdatum: 09.04.2008 Beiträge: 175
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Verfasst am: 26. Feb 2009 13:10 Titel: |
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damn it! I want to have summer! sunshine! _________________ By the time you swear you're his,
shivering and sighing,
And he vows his passion is
infinite, undying-
Lady make a note of this:
One of you is lying.
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Leah
Anmeldungsdatum: 03.09.2008 Beiträge: 38
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Verfasst am: 01. März 2009 19:58 Titel: |
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@chocolate4ever
Yes i wanna summer and holidays too...well i think it's ''just'' in 5 month--
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Leah
Anmeldungsdatum: 03.09.2008 Beiträge: 38
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Verfasst am: 02. März 2009 18:21 Titel: Unhappy, Unloved and out of control- youth of UK !! |
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Hey guys-...
I just wanna know how do you think about the crime in UK...
because i have read TIMES and there was this article..i just write an paragrap of it...
,, An epidemic of violnce, crime abnd durnkennnes has made britain scared of izs young. What´s causing the crises??
---here is my opinion then i would like to hear your opinion...
So in my mind the next generation will be worse..if teh y don´t change something. e.g. the goverment has to conrol people more.
it can´t be that a 11 year old kid have a gun in his hand..that is very irresponslble.
And if they don´t change something everybody haven´t the gust to go out while the people who are in crime devide and seperate themselves more from the social life...
Now it´s your turn..
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chocolate4ever

Anmeldungsdatum: 09.04.2008 Beiträge: 175
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Verfasst am: 07. Okt 2009 14:34 Titel: |
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So as nobody has anything to say to Leah's comment I 'll start with something different.
I'm sure you all heared about the Beer festival in Munich. which ended just 3 days ago.
do you think all this stuff about it on tv was exaggerated or were all these warnings well founded?
greets chocolate _________________ By the time you swear you're his,
shivering and sighing,
And he vows his passion is
infinite, undying-
Lady make a note of this:
One of you is lying.
Dorothy Parker |
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MI Administrator
Anmeldungsdatum: 22.01.2005 Beiträge: 1035 Wohnort: München
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Verfasst am: 07. Okt 2009 18:55 Titel: |
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Well, let's say that at least for London, Leah's comment really is correct. The toll of brutal attacks among London's youth has risen alarmingly during the last years as far as I know (and it is not just one TIMES article that addressed this matter). I believe the reasons to be quite complex, but a great part will probably be a lack of occupation and future perspective. Paired with a world of alianation and hopelesness, this leads to vicious circle of decreasing self-esteem and increasing readiness to commit crimes.
Just a short comment about my view on this topic.
Greetings
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simply
Anmeldungsdatum: 28.04.2010 Beiträge: 1
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Verfasst am: 28. Apr 2010 19:36 Titel: |
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Hi,
this seems to be a very nice site to improve one's English.
Therefore it's a real pity that no one's around here anymore.
In fact, my English is rather miserable, so I'm looking urgently for something to counteract this.^^
So, how do/did you learn the language?
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chocolate4ever

Anmeldungsdatum: 09.04.2008 Beiträge: 175
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Verfasst am: 22. Nov 2010 22:36 Titel: |
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i know it's been 7 months now but i learned english through reading books and traveling a lot. and watching the movies in english helps too  _________________ By the time you swear you're his,
shivering and sighing,
And he vows his passion is
infinite, undying-
Lady make a note of this:
One of you is lying.
Dorothy Parker |
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Pablo

Anmeldungsdatum: 23.11.2010 Beiträge: 191
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Verfasst am: 22. Apr 2011 11:18 Titel: |
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Hello MI
I learn every day english and I hope that my english is anytime so good as yours. I am going to England this summer for three weeks. I will improve my english and see the land and the people. I am going to live in a British Family where I can see the real British life. The city calls Bournemouth and is a nice rural touristplace with beach at the seaside.
I am going to an English school there and i want to doing a journey to Cambridge, Oxford and London when I am in Bournemouth.
Iam very excited and and happy about this travelidea.
Maybe I can send you a letter from Bournemouth (:
Regards, Your friend
Pablo
Also ich schreibe das alles frei raus ohne nachzuschauen oder sowas, ist mein englisch okay für nen anfänger? lerne gerade mal seit 5 Monaten etwa englisch. |
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MI Administrator
Anmeldungsdatum: 22.01.2005 Beiträge: 1035 Wohnort: München
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Verfasst am: 23. Apr 2011 20:02 Titel: |
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I learn English every day and I hope that my English will be as good as yours some day Satzstruktur: Zeitangabe eher ans Ende, mittendrin nicht häufig richtig. I am going to England this summer for three weeks. I will improve my english and see the country and the people. I am going to live in a British family where I can see the real British life. The city is called Bournemouth and it is a nice rural touristplace with beaches at the seaside. Passiv. Die Stadt wird genannt!
I am going to an English school there and i want to do a journey to Cambridge, Oxford and London when I am in Bournemouth. to + infinitiv, also ohne ing. Immer.
I am very excited and and happy about this travel idea.
Maybe I can send you a letter from Bournemouth (:
Regards, Your friend
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I will answer in English. If there is anything you don't understand, just ask.
It is no problem to understand what you are trying to say. Since I am no teacher, it is hard to assess the level of your English, but I can say that it is understandable.
As you can see, there are some mistakes, but as you don't use too difficult sentence structures, you limit the amount of mistakes you make.
Commenting on your mistakes above, I would say that you should pay some attention to the position of constructions like "every day", etc. in a sentence. Those are adverbials of time and they usually go either at the beginning of the sentence or at its end. This: http://www.englisch-lehrbuch.de/grammatik/kapitel18/18_2_2_adverbien_und_adverbiale_bestimmungen.htm might help you.
There are exceptions of course, mostly in order to emphasise, but probably it would be best for you to simply go by the common rules until you get more accomplished in English. The rest is mainly okay, so don't worry too much.
Greetings
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