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| The rise in foreign travel means that more tourists come to our country and that a lot of German people travel to foreign countries. This trend affects our countryīs culture in the way, that we try to change our lifestyle to the one from the people who visit our country. e.g :We open a lot of shops with their food and their clothes.We do this to become more hospitable and the consequence should be that our country becomes more attractive for other people. I think the rise in foreign travel leads to more diversity but if we don't have control about this it could be a danger for us and our country. e.g: because of terrorism. The developments in communications change our lifestyle in the way, that we spend more time watching TV/listening to the radio/doing sth. on the pc than in the past. I think some of us are addicted to these things. But I think itīs good for our culture if we want to have information about the rest of the world. So we arenīt only concerned with ourselves. And itīs necessary for the health of people because when there is an illness in a country we are well-informed and can help there but also start a prevention in Germany. My opinion is, that the growth in the power of international companies isnīt good for our culture and it isnīt a good diversity because the companies have so much money and want to get even more money. They influence people too much and smaller companies havenīt got chances on the market. Thatīs not good for the economy and the culture. But it is a good rank for Germany if we have manufacturing for the companies because this brings money and we need money. |
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| Verfasst am: 26. Okt 2005 19:53 Titel: Textkorrektur wäre nice |
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| Hi, könnt ihr mir bitte die fehler korrigieren, die ihr seht?! Das wäre sehr nett! Wenn es nicht zu 1oo% stimmt, ist das kein problem! Jeder fehler, der verbessert wird, hilft mir! The rise in foreign travel means that more tourists come in our country and that a lot of German people travel in foreign countries. This trend affects our countryīs culture in this way, that we try to change our lifestlye to the one from the people who visit our country. e.g :We open a lot of shops with their food and their clothes.We do this to become more hospitably and the consequence should be that our country becomes more attractive for the other people. I think the rise in foreign travel leads to more diversity but if we havenīt a control about this it could be a danger for us and our country. e.g: because of the terrorism. The developments in communications changes our lifestyle in this way, that we watch TV/listen to the Radio/do sth. on the pc much more time then in the past. I think some of us are addicted by them. But I think itīs good for our culture if we want to have information about the rest of the world. So we arenīt only concentrated by ourselfes. And itīs necessary for the health of the people because when there is a illness in a country we are well-informed and can help there but also start a prevention in Germany. My opinion is, that the growth in the power of international companies isnīt good for our culture and it isnīt a good diversity because the companies have so much money and want to get still more money. They influence the people too much and smaller companies havenīt chances on the market. Thatīs not good for the economy and the culture. But it is a good rank for Germany if we have manufacturing for the companies because this brings money and we need money. Please help lg |
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