 Verfasst am: 10. März 2015 10:19 Titel: Songtextkorrektur - Selbstgeschriebener Song |
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| Meine Frage: Hallo liebe Community, ich bräuchte kurz eure Hilfe. Könnte jemand kurz meine Text auf Fehler korrigieren. Ich werde ihn im Studio aufnehmen und es wäre peinlich, schwerwiegende Fehler in ihm zu haben. Liebe Grüße Meine Ideen: One last touch / I don?t expect too much. / One last hug. / Your body is my drug./ One last kiss / If you don?t want to, let me know this / One last pain / The love to you outwits my brain. / I am lonely all night long. / I remember the time when we were strong (weiterführend nächste Zeile) / Together and no one could tear us apart. / The nights we've cried. / The days we've laughed. / All the great times that we have had. / Are like eradicated from my memories. / Please hold my hand why won?t you stand by me. / Just let me be the one, who deserves you in the end. / Do you feel the same for me? / Is it true that I could be, the person who is in love with that girl. / What if this is just a dream and this girl not even knows me? / It feels like a punch in my face./ Bridge: Im addicted to a girl doesn?t deserve my love. / I can?t say it in her face, so I'm writing of - / My feelings I don?t wanna keep them for me./ ///// |
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