 Verfasst am: 12. Jul 2014 11:25 Titel: Korrekturlesen Equiry Geschäftsbrief |
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| Meine Frage: Hallo liebe Englischfreunde, leider ist mein Englisch nicht das beste, deshalb möchte ich Euch gern bitten mal über folgenden Geschäftsbrief (Enquiry - amerikanische Version) zu schauen und mich auf eventuelle Fehler oder Verbesserungen aufmerksam zu machen. Ich danke Euch! Liebe Grüße Office Exquisite Europastraße 15 ? D-64783 Frankfurt ? Germany Tel. +49(0)453-9019-5 ? Fax +49(0)453-901951 www.office-exquisite.de ? [email protected] July 11, 2014 Office Universe Inc 348 Riverwalk Pewaukee, WI 53072 USA Inquiry for a cooperation as a business partner Dear Sir or Madam A few days ago we have discovered the address of your company on the internet. We are a leading manufacturer of exquisite office furniture based in Frankfurt, Germany. In addition we have a branch in Munich. Our company has been successfully for five years throughout Europe and we are currently planning a market launch in the U.S. for the next year. Therefore we are looking for ambitious business partners for selling our products. To give you a first impression we have attached you a current catalog of our high-quality office furniture. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Susanne Friedrich Secretary Meine Ideen: siehe Brief |
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