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Lonadovinic
BeitragVerfasst am: 21. Feb 2015 10:32    Titel:

Hallo, wir sollen in Englisch eine Liebesgeschichte schreiben und ich muss diese morgen abgeben, es wäre total klasse,
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guestdec
BeitragVerfasst am: 11. Dez 2012 18:44    Titel:

After reading your advertisement in the internet I would like to apply for a work experience placement at your hospital for four weeks during summer 2013.
After finishing school I plan to study medicine. As you can see from the enclosed CV, my mother a paediatric nurse, so I already have a good knowledge of the job. Having learnt English at school for almost five years now I have no language problems. I work efficiently as part of a team organising myself and communicating very well. Working in shifts is no problem for me.
I very much hope that you will offer me a placement. I am prepared to work hard and make myself as useful as possible. I am willing to do my very best to meet your expectations. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,

(Ohne Anspruch auf Perfektion)
Unicorn98
BeitragVerfasst am: 11. Dez 2012 16:26    Titel: Letter of application - Paediatric nurse

Meine Frage:
Hey Leute :-)
Ich muss eine englische Berwerbung für einen Praktikumsplatz schreiben...
Könnt ihr bitte mal "Korrekturlesen" und mir sagen, was ich besser machen kann?

HAPPY CHRISTMAS!

Meine Ideen:
Application for a work experience placement at the Children's Unit

Dear Ms. xxx,
Reading your advertisement in the internet, I apply for a work experience placement with your hospital for four weeks during summer 2013.
When I leave school, I plan to study medicine. As you will see from the enclosed CV, my mother is a paediatric nurse, so I already have a good knowledge of the job. Having learnt English at school for almost five years now, I would have no language problems. I work well as part of a team, organise myself and communicate very well. Working in shifts is no problem for me.
I hope very much that you are able to offer me a placement. I would work hard and make myself as useful as possible. Thank you for reading this application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,

xxx

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