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MI	Verfasst am: 08. Mai 2011 18:02    Titel: Re: Letter of motivation ruesseltier hat Folgendes geschrieben: with this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the University of Exeter. I am studying Law in Context in the 4th term with the main focus on commercial law at the University of Dresden. I think the Erasmus programme is a great chance to advance my personal abilities and to broaden my mind. I look forward to study in a new environment for one year, getting to know international people and the British Culture. Das erste ist ein Satzstellungsvorschlag. Ich bin nicht ganz sicher, ob das andere nicht auch gehen müsste, würde aber bei Ort vor Zeit bleiben. Beim zweiten Satzteil fehlt die Subjektzuordnung. During my stay I hope to greatly improve my English. I am sure I can apply these skills in my future career. In addition I would like to extend my international legal knowledge to see the law from a different angle. This year abroad is a good opportunity to make use of my subject-specific command of English. I have also decided in favour of England to discover the country with all the sights and the beautiful landscape. My experiences abroad with all ups and downs will help me managing professional challenges as well as personal challenges in my further life. The time in England will be unforgettable and exciting for me. Gerade der letzte Paragraph erscheint mir so ein bisschen random general nonsense. Da dein Brief insgesamt kurz ist, solltest du da vielleicht dann doch etwas mehr sagen? Vllt. kann man noch ein bisschen darauf eingehen, warum gerade England fachlich interessant ist? Gruß MI
ruesseltier	Verfasst am: 08. Mai 2011 15:42    Titel: Letter of motivation Hallo das ist mein letter of motivation für ein erasmusstudium in england bitte mal durchlesen und verbessserungs-/ korrekturvorschläge machen Danke with this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the University of Exeter. I am studying Law in Context in the 4th term with the main focus on commercial law at the University of Dresden. I think the Erasmus programme is a great chance to advance my personal abilities and to broaden my mind. I look forward to study one year in a new environment and get to know international people and the British Culture. During my stay I would like to improve my command of English. I am sure I can apply these skills in my future career. In addition I would like to extend my international legal knowledge to see the law from a different angle. This year abroad is a good opportunity to make use of my subject-specific command of English. I have also decided in favour of England to discover the country with all the sights and the beautiful landscape. My experiences abroad with all ups and downs will help me managing professional challenges as well as personal challenges in my further life. The time in England will be unforgettable and exciting for me.

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