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Verfasst am: 19. Apr 2010 14:22 Titel: |
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Zitat: | Hi I am Toxin. I am a lizard. All my friends call me Toxin because I am very dangerous and I can kill my enemies with my deadly [T]toxin. Now I tell you about a special day at the desert. One[s] day I was searching food for my family, when [than] I saw a lots of human[s] kids who were digging holes. [And t] There was also a dangerous looking man [to, he] who had got a gun[. The dangerous looking man] and was eating seeds. After a while the guys stopped working and went to the man. The man filled water in the kid's canteen [of the kids]. Than I could saw a [I] boy was steeling the sack with the seed out of the back of the man. (Ich bin mir nicht sicher, was du damit sagen willst ?)After the man finished filling the canteens he drove[d with a car] away. Then the boy who stole the seeds was sharing the seeds with the other guys. Only some minutes later the chip (chap? man?) came back. The guys did not know where to hide the seeds so they poured it into a hole[s]. I think this holes belonged to the guy who jumped in the holes und bury the seeds hastily. (und was willst du damit sagen? Tut mir Leid, aber ich kenn das Buch nicht...)Than the man came back and [goes] went to the hole where the sunflower[s] seeds [was]were. He [goes]went to the boy and [and asking] asked him what he [were bury]had buried. He said nothing but the man did not believe him and dug. After he found the seeds he took the boy into his chip an drove away | Ich hab jetzt mal versucht zumindest die mir offensichtlichen Fehler zu verbessern. Da sollte aber trotzdem nochmal jemand anderes drüberschauen. Nur noch zwei kurze Fragen: was soll "chip" bedeuten? Das hab ich in dem Zusammenhang noch nie gehört Und in welcher Klasse bist du? Dann kann ich deine Kenntnisse besser einschätzen |
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