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| hi.. ich bin so zusagen ein englisch genie..hier ist dein text fehlerfrei: In summerholidays i was in Europapark. It was funny there. I have ridden everyall. Most fanniest were "Euro Mir" and "Euro Sat". They´re railways. They´re the same fast. One of them was inside of the big bullet. It was dark when my brother and i had ridden. But there was lightradiates. I have fun and it was funny for me. I was in Schluchsee, too. My family and i have ridden pedalboots. It was easy to start, but a long time was difficult for me. I´m not alone to kick. I rode with my brother. And i´m sometimes changed with my father. There was a small island. You can camp there. But we haven´t camp, because the weather was not so good. ich hoffe bekommst eine gute note;) |
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| Verfasst am: 22. Feb 2010 18:24 Titel: |
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| Verfasst am: 22. Feb 2010 18:22 Titel: Text in Englisch übersetzen |
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| Ich muss ein Text über meine Sommerferien schreiben. Und ich bin mir nicht sicher, ob es gut ist. Ich habe bestimmt in manchen Stellen grammatische Fehler. Hier ist der Text: In summerholidays I was in Europapark. It was funny there. I have ridden eyeryall. Most fanniest were "Euro Mir" and "Euro Sat". Tey´re railways. They´re the same fast. One of them was inside of the big bullet. It was dark when my brother and I had ridden. But there was lightradiates. I have fun and it was funny for me. I was in Schluchsee, too. My family and I have ridden pedalboots. It was easy to start, but a long time was difficult for me. I´m not alone to kick. I rode with my brother. And sometimes changed I with my father. There was a small island. You can camp there. But we haven´t camp, because the weather wasn´t good. Ich habe noch mehr Texte geschrieben, aber diese Texte sind vielleicht viele Fehler drin. Ich freue mich auf eure Verbesserungsvoschläge und eure Kritik. Danke im Vorraus  |
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