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Prep.	Verfasst am: 29. Jan 2010 13:51    Titel: Oh vielen vielen Dank Jack!
Jack	Verfasst am: 27. Jan 2010 12:26    Titel: Re: Essay: Transport by plane Prep hat Folgendes geschrieben: One of the greatest inventions of the 20th century is the airplane. In recent years, air travel has become more and more popular (Komma hier falsch) because planes are the fastest and safest means of transport and they can also overcome great distances in short periods of time. Travelling (wenn du bei "airplane" die amerikanische Schreibweise benutzt, solltest du das hier auch tun und "traveling" schreiben) by plane is also very comfortable and it is a good thing for tourists (das Komma ist hier falsch) who want to visit a lot of different destinations in a limited period of time. Unfortunately, airplanes have a huge variety of disadvantages. For instance, they cause a lot of pollution. In addition, the tickets are (Wenn der Satz mit "In addition beginnt, ist "also" eine unnötige Doppelung) very expensive. To sum up, travelling (siehe oben) by plane is one of the best means of transport for long distances. But people should keep in mind that it is harmful to our environment.
Prep	Verfasst am: 26. Jan 2010 22:44    Titel: Essay: Transport by plane Hallo Ich brauche Hilfe beim Korrigieren meines Essays One of the greatest inventions of the 20th century is the airplanes. In recent years air travel has become more and more popular, because they are the fastest and safest means of transport and they also can overcome great distances in short time. Travelling by plane is also very confortable and it is a good thing for tourists, who want to visit a lot of different destinations in limited period of time. Unfortunately airplanes have a huge variety of disadvantages. For instance they cause a lot of pollution. In addition, the tickets are also very expensive. To sum up, travelling by plane is one of the best means of transport for long distances. But people should keep in mind that it is harmful to our environment.

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