 Verfasst am: 10. Nov 2009 14:30 Titel: Korrektur |
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| Hier mal die Korrektur Me and my family My name is Sonja. I`m 16 years old and I live in Heidgraben. I go to vocational school. My mothers name is Silvia she is 42 years old. My fathers name is Klaus he is 48 years old. I have a sister she is 13 years old.We have two dogs. The dogs name are Sandy and balu. Sandy is a schäferhund and balu a bordercvolley mix. My mother have a horse, it name is Gina it is 8 years old. I have two Grandmas and one grandpa. The Grandmas names are Helga and Magarete. Helga is very nice person and I like her but I don`t like Magarete. My Grandpas name is Uwe he is very nice. Helga and Uwe are married. The disadvantages at my sister are that she is mostly very nerved. I hate it when she takes my clothes or when she`s in my room. The advantages by my sister are very little. Sometimes I can talk to her. |
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| Verfasst am: 18. Okt 2009 19:52 Titel: englisch text |
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| me and my family my name is Sonja. I#m 16 years old and i live in Heidgraben. i go to vocational school. My mothers name is Silvia she is 42 years old. My fathers name is klaus he is 48 years old. I have a sister she is 13 years old. We have two dogs. The dogs name are Sandy and balu. Sandy is a schäferhund and balu a bordercvolley mix. My mother have a horse. the horses name is Gina she is 8 years old. I have two Grandmas and one grandpa. The Grandmas names are Helga and Magarete. Helga is very nice person and i like she. Magarete i don´t like she. my Grandpas name is Uwe he is too very nice. Helga and Uwe are married. The disadvantages at my sister are she is mostly very nerved. I hate it when she have my clothes or when she in my room is. The advantages by my sister are very little. Sometimes can I talk with she. ES währe sehr nett wenn ihr es verbessern könnt wenn ich was falsch habe das istz extrenm wichtig !! dankee  |
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