| tippi |
 Verfasst am: 26. Jun 2009 18:23 Titel: Re: letter of motivation - business studies |
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| timbalism hat Folgendes geschrieben: |
Dear Madam or Sir,
I am currently in a dual international study program at the XYZ-academy hier fehlt dein Studiengang, was studierst du zur Zeit?. With the upcoming das soll vermutlich "folgende" heißen, stimmt so aber nicht. besser wäre: following references I will expose klingt irgendwie auch merkwürdig, aber mir fällt gerade nichts entschärftes ein my suitability for the bachelor program Communications & Marketing at the XYZ-university.
In June 2008 I absolved my A-level degree absolve heißt freisprechen entbinden, du meinst: graduated at the XYZ-school in XYZ-city with Economics and English as major. During my A-level I recognized realised my affinity vll. auch passion? to economical topics. (In class/during the course) I got was confronted with global financial markets, international marketing and the diversity of job opportunities in the business administration sector.
During my current studies welche da wären? I got gained deeper insight in the (working) field of marketing, communication and advertising. Within my two semesters at the XYZ-academy I was already given the possibility to obtain real professional work experiences while developing weekly presentations and marketing strategies for external clients gehört das zum Lehrplan oder war es eine Initative der Uni nach außen? external = nicht uni?. Working in groups wann gab es Gruppenarbeit? gave me the chance to acquire group dynamics and improved my communication skills. To gain a wider knowledge of languages and cross-cultural competence I participated in French and Chinese courses am Sprachzentrum oder als Sprachkurs in dem jeweiligen Land?.
Beside my studies I am always taking the chance to face real work experiences in the company of my father my father's company was ist das für eine Firma und inwiefern passt das zu deinem Studiengang?. Moreover I am very committed dedicated to apply my gained skills and experiences to it indem du was dort tust?. However, it got clear to me slang... besser: I am aware, that beside brilliant ideas and communication skills, strong entrepreneurial leadership qualities are needed to lead a company to success. I am keenly ambitious to develop the proper skills that will help me (to) analyze, measure and lead corporate strategic decisions.
Through ich denke irgendwie,dass es by heißen müsste the information days I was able to discover the XYZ-university, it’s concept, it’s classes, it’s building, it’s professors and it’s alles appos-dings weg students in depth more closely, weil in voller tiefe fänd ich merkwürdig. In my eyes the ideal concept of practical terms, projects, internships, semesters abroad and intensive language training makes the XYZ-university a unique asset das versteh ich nicht to my future career. fehlt ja eigentlich nur noch irgendwo der Wunsch, dass du da hin möchtest 
Yours sincerely
XYZ-name |
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| timbalism |
| Verfasst am: 26. Jun 2009 14:54 Titel: letter of motivation - business studies |
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Hallo,
Mit diesem letter of motivation möchte ich mich für ein BWL Studium mit Marketing/Kommunikations-Schwerpunkt bewerben. Es geht darum seine Vorzüge und Eignung in einem kurzen motivation letter zu beschreiben.
Wäre mir echt eine riesen Hilfe, wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet.
Hab ihn schon einige Male gelesen...
Wenn ihr möchtet könnt Ihr Ihn auch voten.
Bin auf das Ergebnis gespannt...
1000 Dank
timbalism :-)
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Dear Madam or Sir,
I am currently in a dual international study program at the XYZ-academy. With the upcoming references I will expose my suitability for the bachelor program Communications & Marketing at the XYZ-university.
In June 2008 I absolved my A-level degree at the XYZ-school in XYZ-city with economics and English as major. During my A-level I recognized my affinity to economical topics. I got confronted with global financial markets, international marketing and the diversity of job opportunities in the business administration sector.
During my current studies I got deeper insights in the working field of marketing, communication and advertising. Within my two semesters at the XYZ-academy I was already given the possibility to obtain real professional work experiences while developing weekly presentations and marketing strategies for external clients. Working in groups gave me the chance to acquire group dynamics and improved my communication skills. To gain a wider knowledge of languages and cross-cultural competence I participated in French and Chinese courses.
Beside my studies I am always taking the chance to face real work experiences in the company of my father. Moreover I am very committed to apply my gained skills and experiences to it. However it got clear to me, that beside brilliant ideas and communication skills, strong entrepreneurial leadership qualities are needed to lead a company to success. I am keenly ambitious to develop the proper skills that help me to analyze, measure and lead corporate strategic decisions.
Trough the information days I was able to discover the XYZ-university, it’s concept, it’s classes, it’s building, it’s professors and it’s students in depth. In my eyes the ideal concept of practical terms, projects, internships, semesters abroad and intensive language training makes the XYZ-university a unique asset to my future career.
Yours sincerely
XYZ-name |
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