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Eva__Maria	Verfasst am: 21. Apr 2009 20:01    Titel: vielen vielen Dank!! das ging ja schnell und ich bin wirklich tierisch erleichtert
Gargy	Verfasst am: 21. Apr 2009 19:58    Titel: Re: english homework...correction please?! Eva__Maria hat Folgendes geschrieben: We would like to give you an overview besser: give a review (you rauslassen!) of the second chapter. The first situation is that aua! besser: In the first situtatoin oder at the beginning the junior class is waiting in the Academy Honor Room. Dr. Hager, the old and strict mathematics teacher callseinfügen: the pupils (or students) Knox Overstreet, Neil Perry, Charlie Dalton and Richard Cameron to Mr. Nolan, the headmaster of Welton Academy. After a short small talk Mr. Nolan explains to Todd that the boys can take part in extracurricular activities at Welton. But the boys have to take them as serious as normal class work otherwise they will be punished with demerits demerit marks?. Then the others wer? let Mr. Nolan know that they take part in the same activities as the year before. Mr. Nolan also suggests Todd Anderson acceding those of his former school in? Balincrest. Todd, however, reacts very bashfully because he doesn't want to continue soccer but he hardly manages to breathe klingt merkwürdig, kannst du aber so lassen, mein vorschlag wäre: whisper his wish. Mr. Nolan doesn't listen and respond to Todd's or the boys' needs in general and just dismisses them. After that Neil Perry and Todd Anderson got to the dormitory to move into their room. On their way they talk about Todd's brother Jeffrey, who has already attended Welton Academy successfully. With them arriving in their room, Knox Overstreet, Charlie Dalton, Steven Meeks make a visit. They want to learn together in a group, which they want Neil to join, too. Thereby they get to know Todd and talk again about his well-known brother. But the boys are interrupted abruptly as Neil has to recognize that his father hasn't left yet. In this situation, it is indicated that the students make a difference in their behaviour when they are alone or when teachers and parents are present. The boys don't take discipline, which is one of the four pillars, as serious as it seems. In our opinion, the most important characters in this chapter are Todd and Neil. Todd is the transfer student, whom the others also refer to as “the new boy“. So he has anyway das könnte man noch rauslassen an extraordinary status. Neil is his roommate and his first friend at Welton. Also the other characters appear to be connected with Neil and that is why they also get to know Todd. Viel Glück
Eva__Maria	Verfasst am: 21. Apr 2009 19:22    Titel: english homework...correction please?! zusammenfassung des zweiten kapitels von dead poets society....wird morgen als referat von mir vorgestottert könnte jemand so nett sein und das mal nach fehlern durchsehen und verbesserungsvorschläge anbringen ?! danke ist bisschen dringend aber herzlichen dank schonmal =)) eva We would like to give you an overview of the second chapter. The first situation is that the junior class is waiting in the Academy Honor Room. Dr. Hager, the old and strict mathematics teacher calls Knox Overstreet, Neil Perry, Charlie Dalton and Richard Cameron to Mr. Nolan, the headmaster of Welton Academy. After a short smalltalk Mr. Nolan explains to Todd that the boys can take part in extracurricular activities at Welton. But the boys have to take them as serious as normal class work otherwise they will be punished with demerits. Then the others let Mr. Nolan know that they take the same activities as the year before. Mr. Nolan also suggests Todd Anderson acceding those of his former school Balincrest. Todd, however, reacts very bashfully because he doesn't want to continue soccer but he hardly manages to breathe his wish. Mr. Nolan doesn't listen and respond to Todd's or the boys' needs in general and just dimisses them. After that Neil Perry and Todd Anderson got to the dormitory to move into their room. On their way they talk about Todd's brother Jeffrey, who has already attended Welton Academy successfully. With them arriving in their room, Knox Overstreet, Charlie Dalton, Steven Meeks make a visit. They want to learn together in a group, which they want Neil to join, too. Thereby they get to know Todd and talk again about his well-known brother. But the boys are interrupted abruptly as Neil has to recognize that his father hasn't left yet. In this situation, it is indicated that the students make a difference in their behaviour when they are alone or when teachers and parents are present. The boys don't take discipline, which is one of the four pillars, as serious as it seems. In our opinion, the most importent characters in this chapter are Todd and Neil. Todd is the transfer student, the others also refer to as “the new boy“. So he has anyway an extraordinary status. Neil is his roommate and his first friend at Welton. Also the other characters appear to be connected with Neil and that is why they also get to know Todd.

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