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Goldenhind	Verfasst am: 04. Apr 2008 10:09    Titel: Katzeemilia hat Folgendes geschrieben: The text is an extract from George W. Bush's Inaugural Address after his reelection to the American president and reveals the role of the USA in the world and its relationship to other countries. The main point in Bush's speech is the freedom, which plays vermutlich besser present perfect progressive the main role in America since the founding, in contrast to tyranny. From Bush's point of view this freedom has to be protected and spread worldwide. For the reason that American borders are not safe after the terrorist attack, the interest of the USA is helping oppressed countries in today's world to bring them liberty, democracy and freedom. Bush wants to be comitted to delivers oppressed countries from their oppression by being on their side and punishing the leaders who oppress their people.
Katzeemilia	Verfasst am: 03. Apr 2008 19:23    Titel: huhu, ich wäre euch sehr dankbar, wenn ich meinen anfang kurz korrekturlesen könnten. habe meinen text selber mal durchgeschaut und kann keine fehler entdecken. aber ihr wisst ja, seinen eigenen fehler sieht man selber immer nicht. wäre furchtbar lieb. The text is an extract of George W. Bush's Inaugural Address after his reelection to the American president and reveals the role of the USA in the world and its relationship to other countries. The main point in Bush's speech is the freedom, which plays the main role in America since the founding, in contrast to tyranny. From Bush's point of view this freedom has to be protected and spreaded worldwide. By reason that American borders are not safety after the terrorist attack, the interest of the USA are helping oppressed countries in today's world to bring them liberty, democracy and freedom. Bush wants to be comitted to delivers oppressed countries from their oppression by being on their side and punishing the leaders who oppress their people. lg Katze =)
Katzeemilia	Verfasst am: 29. März 2008 10:47    Titel: super vielen vielen dank hat mir echt weitergeholfen =D DANKE
Goldenhind	Verfasst am: 28. März 2008 16:02    Titel: Re: Korrekturlesen: Cartoon analysis Katzeemilia hat Folgendes geschrieben: cartoon analysis The cartoon Titel? , a work by Cam Cardow, is divided in two parts. In the first part you can see a man in the down right corner with jug ears, a big mouth and a bald patch. He wears a suit with a necktie. It seems that the man stands behind a lectern and gives a speech, which begins with the following sentence: ,,For the next four years we will spread liberty and freedom to the darkest corners of the world.'' This speech bubble is in the upper part. The man is typical of a cartoon from G.W.Bush der Satz klingt für mich irgendwie komisch. He is shown, when he was choosen for the American president, therefore ,,for the next four years''. In the second part in the down left corner you can see a tank and the man in there screaming ,,LOAD FREEDOM''. Behind the man the American flag blows. In the background the viewer can see bombing in the sky. The viewer's attention is focused firstly on the speech bubbles and secondly on the tank. The speech in the first and second part is contradictory to the tank in the second part of the cartoon. The picture inspires the viewer to think about the message of the cartoon that G.W.Bush says things which he does not mean. What the cartoonist wants to criticise is Bush's behaviour. Bush says indeed that he wants to ,, spread liberty and freedom to the darkest corners of the world'', but he takes this as a pretense of making war against other states with ,,the darkest corners of the world''. I agree with that message, because the history has shown us what Bush has reached. For example he implicated Iraq in a war with the pretenses to bring liberty, freedom and democracy for the population. Außerdem benutzt man in einer Bildbeschreibung eigentlich present progressive.
Katzeemilia	Verfasst am: 27. März 2008 17:28    Titel: Korrekturlesen: Cartoon analysis hallo alle zusammen, könntet ihr bitte folgenden text korrekturlesen? das wäre echt super nett cartoon analysis The cartoon , a work by Cam Cardow, is divided in two parts. In the first part you can see a man in the down right corner with jug ears, a big mouth and a bald patch. He wears a suit with a necktie. It seems that the man stands behind a lectern and gives a speech, which beginns with following sentence: ,,For the next four years we will spread liberty and freedom to the darkest corners of the world.'' These speech bubble is in the upper part. The man is typical of a cartoon from G.W.Bush. He is shown, when he was choosen for the American president, therefore ,,for the next four years''. In the second part in the down left corner you can see a tank and the man in there screaming ,,LOAD FREEDOM''. Behind the man the American flag blows. In the background the viewer can see bombing in the sky. The viewer's attention is focused firstly on the speech bubbles and secondly on the tank. The speech in the first and second part is contradictory with the tank in the second part of the cartoon. The picture inspires the viewer to think about the message of the cartoon that G.W.Bush says things that he doesn't mean. What the cartoonist wants to criticise is Bush's behaviour. Bush says indeed that he wants to ,, spread liberty and freedom to the darkest corners of the world'', but he takes this as a pretenses making war against other states with ,,the darkest corners of the world''. I agree with that message, because the history has shown us what Bush has reached. For example he implicated Irak in a war with the pretenses to bring the population liberty, freedom and democracy. Danke schonmal im vorraus ihr würdet mir damit echt weiterhelfen lg Katze

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