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Verfasst am: 02. März 2008 17:04 Titel: Re: Korrekturen hinsichtlich Rechtschreibung und Grammatik |
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MIB hat Folgendes geschrieben: | Hi Leute 1. The main sewer was half as wide as The Thames. 2. They have blocked the sewer that leads into the Russian zone. The sewer police was all down there. 3. Somebody had shot and scraped the hand. The torch flew out of his hand. 4. He had orders to look after Martins. 5. Lime had not a torch, he could not see a thing. wegen des past tense But he fired when Martins was twenty feet away. 6. Two policeman were shot. It had to make Martins Was soll das heißen - den Satz verstehe ich leider nicht. 7. Lime had climed up a few steps of the iron stairs. 8. Martins bent down to listen and then he shot him. 9. Martins has lost his friend. He had not known him all years. (er kannte ihn all die Jahre nicht) In the end he had to shoot him. 10. Anna was at the second funeral. Her hand was through Martins "through"? vielleicht "in"? oder "they stood hand in hand"?. Die unterstrichenen Wörter passen hoffentlich zum Satz. a) Calloway was very dissapointed when Lime did not appear. b) Martins was worried about Anna's safety. Genitiv s vergessen c) Waiting for buses is boring. d) Ann was less attractive then he expected her to be. Bei den unterstrichenen Wörter musste ich mich zwischen ing-form und infinitive entscheiden. a) I hope you do not mind helping me with the translation. b) We have not finished reading the book. c) Calloway ordered Martins to wait for Lime in a cafe. d) We expect Lime to come to save his friend. Jetzt nochmal zur Rechtschreibung plus Grammatik: What have you done yesterday?? Did Ana want to come with you?? Vergangenheit --> kein s! Do you fly back to England today?? Last year I was able to get some information. If we arrest Lime pretty soon, we are going to save (so?)the lives of a people. wirklich, ein Volk? - nicht eher "ein Mensch", also "a person" After we had opened the coffin, we discovered that Lime was still alive. "had been open" ist eine unvollständige Passivform - die aber ohnehin hier nicht hingehört | Zumindest das Gröbste sollte ich gefunden haben! Gruß MI |
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